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Sammy's first game of High School Football! He's got a lot of dreams riding on this, but will he experience the high of victory, or the crush of defeat?
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Banner art by Kigai Holt. See the full illustration here!
Sammy's first game of High School Football! He's got a lot of dreams riding on this, but will he experience the high of victory, or the crush of defeat?
>Next Chapter
Banner art by Kigai Holt. See the full illustration here!
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I've read your other comments- and you've done a pretty good job considering you didn't know much about football, let alone high school! I've been homeschooled as well, and sports are just on a whole nother level for me. I would have done a terrible job writing something like this- but you did great.
I've also read part 1 of Ashes, Ashes. Dang, the whole thing worked me up a bit. I just can't when it comes to characters facing their fears no matter the cost. I'm glad Sammy is with a pack who understands him and treats him well ;U;
I didn't really have an idea as to what to expect for this whole story- and I didn't really know there was more to it! (I had my SFW button toggled on- whoops) In the end, and now with a bit of insight into the BioPharm, I can resonate with Sammy's feelings, and I'm glad I took the time to read it.
I've also read part 1 of Ashes, Ashes. Dang, the whole thing worked me up a bit. I just can't when it comes to characters facing their fears no matter the cost. I'm glad Sammy is with a pack who understands him and treats him well ;U;
I didn't really have an idea as to what to expect for this whole story- and I didn't really know there was more to it! (I had my SFW button toggled on- whoops) In the end, and now with a bit of insight into the BioPharm, I can resonate with Sammy's feelings, and I'm glad I took the time to read it.
I mark the stories as mature when needed for violence or mental health reasons. There will be the occasional reference to sex when doing worldbuilding, but I'm hoping to get this published as a novel some day so there will be no graphic sex scenes. (Which, I know, will make it harder to draw in a crowd here on FA. :P ) I do hope you'll keep reading and commenting on "Ashes, Ashes" and "Questions Of My Childhood"!
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