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Coast Chronicles 1-1: Shocking the streets!
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"Return to Coast City!
The new hero shocks the streets!"Fused chapters one and two together, in addition to having updated the format, thanks to the advice of
SLaveDog554 Hope you like this new one better!Story and characters ©
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Great first chapter loved it. I really liked how you built Etrian Kalistar's character. Plus the introduction of the others, Bitter Chill was awesome and loved the contrast between him and shock Dragon. Plus given what I know I like how Etrian's wheels are turning. The action is really well done and I actually felt bad for AuraBurn here. Lol. But Great first chapter and wonder if that object that Kalik Tolston stole will come into Play? Can't wait to start reading the next one!
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