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In Salen's hands (ILLUSTRATION NOT USED *yet*)
This is an *unused* illustration that is to be added in a year or so, with lots of revisions, with slightly more illustrations not shown in the current book edition.
I just can't get this book thing right... Every time I look at the proofs, I find something that could've been added, reformatted, taken out, blah blah blah...
So. What's going on here? Basically, as always, Rasheeda gets herself in a pickle, before getting the... em... said pickle... Or she's just preparing to take a dive in a pool. Who knows?
-BT
Salen and Rasheeda are © to me
I just can't get this book thing right... Every time I look at the proofs, I find something that could've been added, reformatted, taken out, blah blah blah...
So. What's going on here? Basically, as always, Rasheeda gets herself in a pickle, before getting the... em... said pickle... Or she's just preparing to take a dive in a pool. Who knows?
-BT
Salen and Rasheeda are © to me
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it might help to create a FINAL version, and give that away to a proofreader. when it returns apply their suggestions (and only those), then give the result away to the next proofreader. and so on until the suggestions become marginal.
don't overdo, or else you'll never finish it at all.
don't overdo, or else you'll never finish it at all.
Let me correct my response, the *current* book being sold now, was indeed sent to a proofreader. But after looking over the proofs, I caught MORE than a couple of things that would've made some scenes more coherent (needs a brief explanation without being overtly exposition'ish).
Any revisions, additional pictures, creating hopefully the *then* FINAL version, will have to wait a year or slightly later from the current printed version.
-BT
Any revisions, additional pictures, creating hopefully the *then* FINAL version, will have to wait a year or slightly later from the current printed version.
-BT
it wasn't my intent to imply something. it did read like you were still fiddling with the draft, or somesuch.
I've written myself somethign that started out as a role-playing storytelling in a forum, and it had initially suffered greatly from the other players' very incoherent writing. as if they had never read a good book and wondered what it was that made it good... the result was a bit long for a short story, so I gave it to proofreading hoping for input. which has yet to come... protip: never let a good friend proofread; they might never give you advice. :P
I've written myself somethign that started out as a role-playing storytelling in a forum, and it had initially suffered greatly from the other players' very incoherent writing. as if they had never read a good book and wondered what it was that made it good... the result was a bit long for a short story, so I gave it to proofreading hoping for input. which has yet to come... protip: never let a good friend proofread; they might never give you advice. :P
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