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Donny and the DNA Disease - Ch 8
<< CH07: http://www.furaffinity.net/view/26297551/
>> CH09: http://www.furaffinity.net/view/28432503/
For the record, Adomm does not star in this story, nor is it based off any of her experiences. Don't try to figure out her potential involvement. This is something entirely of my own design.
That being said, for a moment I didn't really know where to go from chapter 6. I envisioned just burning through the week and finishing it the way I had it planned, but then I decided that perhaps I can throw some new things in after all. It doesn't have to end so quickly. The story has been developing a lot more than I had anticipated, and what sort of writer would I be if I decided to just rush it?
No, I'm enjoying this new direction, and I think I can take it even farther. Might get three or four more chapters out of it yet. I hope that you, dear readers, stay patient with me.
>> CH09: http://www.furaffinity.net/view/28432503/
For the record, Adomm does not star in this story, nor is it based off any of her experiences. Don't try to figure out her potential involvement. This is something entirely of my own design.
That being said, for a moment I didn't really know where to go from chapter 6. I envisioned just burning through the week and finishing it the way I had it planned, but then I decided that perhaps I can throw some new things in after all. It doesn't have to end so quickly. The story has been developing a lot more than I had anticipated, and what sort of writer would I be if I decided to just rush it?
No, I'm enjoying this new direction, and I think I can take it even farther. Might get three or four more chapters out of it yet. I hope that you, dear readers, stay patient with me.
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Yes, you continute this story like a pro: character development and new discoveries. And a little cliffhanger at the end, with the new mystery on beginning: is the virus sentinent being?
* yes, ferret has five fingers, but Vick dewclaw is semi-opposable, while Jeff's not. :)
* orangutang? Why not orangutan?
* I think, that somebody who discovers his regenerating abilities could try to avoid catching and hide in wilderness, becoming constant source of epidemy. There ere are animals whos size relatively same.
* yes, ferret has five fingers, but Vick dewclaw is semi-opposable, while Jeff's not. :)
* orangutang? Why not orangutan?
* I think, that somebody who discovers his regenerating abilities could try to avoid catching and hide in wilderness, becoming constant source of epidemy. There ere are animals whos size relatively same.
I appreciate your feedback.
Mind that Jeff didn't spend nearly as much time in his alternate form as Vick, so he may have left that little detail out. Vick was keen on proving his superior claw abilities at the courtyard, though unfortunately he never got the chance.
I believe that both versions of the animal name "orangutan" or "orangutang" seem to apply. Sort of like the "e" in the word judgement. It appears to be more common to drop the 'g', though, so I will revise.
Mind that Jeff didn't spend nearly as much time in his alternate form as Vick, so he may have left that little detail out. Vick was keen on proving his superior claw abilities at the courtyard, though unfortunately he never got the chance.
I believe that both versions of the animal name "orangutan" or "orangutang" seem to apply. Sort of like the "e" in the word judgement. It appears to be more common to drop the 'g', though, so I will revise.
Loved the chapter, though the dream does have me wondering about the virus... What was at the top of the tower, and is it at the top of the one in real life as well? So many questions...
The gym teacher and Jeff teaming up was awesome, and I love how the zebra finally accomplished its goal of taking Donny for a full lap. Next time, let's go for two. Or three!
Also, poor Vick... Hope everything goes well for him. #PrayersForVick
The gym teacher and Jeff teaming up was awesome, and I love how the zebra finally accomplished its goal of taking Donny for a full lap. Next time, let's go for two. Or three!
Also, poor Vick... Hope everything goes well for him. #PrayersForVick
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