You know what? This color on grey lines makes those eyes and lips pop! Not a fan of the gold though. It just feels gaudy to me. But he is your character and a little gaudy won't hurt his look enough to care aside from nitpicking.

Still love how he wares lipstick, as I normally hate the big lips look. =^_^=

I went with gold thinking it would look good against his dark skin and give him something of a posh attitude for his occupation. Might go with teal in place of the gold. Still a wip :)

Gold and black does look nice. I am suddenly reminded of the look of a Power Ranger. XD

It is always a good thing to try out new ides. Provided the idea doesn't harm someone, and you don't get too invested into the idea. (more than a few times I had sn idea for a character and absolutely had to do that, just to realize later that it just didn't work.)

That said I do like his clothing choice. =^_^=