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Okay now that it's a little bit more finished people won't think it's porn. Lol. Did try to address the tail and pointing leg leading the eye off the page too much. Hopefully that worked.
Does it still look too erotic in positioning? Any changes to the composition needed?
Does it still look too erotic in positioning? Any changes to the composition needed?
Category Artwork (Digital) / Fantasy
Species Unspecified / Any
Size 936 x 612px
File Size 701.3 kB
Okay, though I didn't really pay much attention to the fact the lines were multi-coloured.
I didn't really give it any thought until you pointed it out.
It looks nice though with the giants and the tiny landscape and such, it just feels busy.
Just my opinion, take it for what it's worth.
I didn't really give it any thought until you pointed it out.
It looks nice though with the giants and the tiny landscape and such, it just feels busy.
Just my opinion, take it for what it's worth.
I think where it seems to have a hard time now is on the right side. I did see you were mindfull to make the take a curved path to bring the viewer back in, it was a good idea. but is too close to the edge if they follow the outside. What i would recommend is to open the space inside of the tail the the viewer can come back around from the inside. the way i drew it can offer a more straight forward path as well.
https://www.dropbox.com/s/4787xwiqy.....%20AM.png?dl=0
https://www.dropbox.com/s/4787xwiqy.....%20AM.png?dl=0
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