*pops him on the arm... that was so unfair... you had me so going and I was gonna curse you soundly for making me cry again....

now we shall see what happens yes?

V.

...yeah, so I'm an ebil bastich.

And yes, he'll be back in about a month when the prompts start back up.

excellent....

V.

The beginning is really horrid. I had this thought in my head: "Is he going to do it again? Hasn't he faced just enough tragedy in his life already?" I sighed, I truly sighed in relief, when the true nature of the scene was revealed. Otherwise... well written and interesting. There something mysterious going on, but you left it covered. So, if you're still continuing this as a series of Thursday Prompts, I am looking forward to read more.

Well written, entertaining, captivating... I enjoyed reading this. Good work.

Thanks

Timothy thought she’d have the same disapproving expression on her face when drowning small kittens or blowing asbestos dust in the ventilation shafts just to confirm to all there was cruelty in the world.

Wow, did that part ever just jump out and grab me by the throat. Lines like those simply linger for days and days. And our little Timothy is growing up before our very eyes. I really like seeing that.

Can't wait to find out where this is headed.

'Can't wait to find out where this is headed.'

Kinda wondering myself.

Well, you've certainly got us worried now. I think it's confirmed that we all want the best for Timothy and would like to step into the story and see if we could do something to help.

Or maybe it's just me.

Good work, T!

Oops, see below. Seems I'm getting a little rusty.

Thanks, your comments really made me smile.

I’ve also been wondering if I should write a non prompt piece just to let everyone in on some of the background. I always dislike it when too much is held back for no other reason than to keep readers in the dark.

You certainly had everyone, including me, going with the first part of this story. Nice job on that one.

Good job transitioning into the next part of the story too. You are doing a good job of revealing what is going to be happening in the future a little bit at a time.

Thanks. Glad that little tease didn't come off as too mean.

You do a good job of creating constant tension throughout the story. It left me wondering about the nature of Timothy's fate.

I had some trouble with the setting before they got home. I was trying to visualize their location, but I couldn't seem to.

The relationship between Enzo and Timothy is a close one and you do a good job of showing the connection between them. I think that intimate connection they have is the strongest element you have in this story.

Good work!

-Vaperfox

Ah, you probably missed an earlier story that would have helped this one make more sense. http://www.furaffinity.net/view/1512034/

And if you have the time and the guts all of the Timothy stories are in a single file here. http://www.furaffinity.net/view/1640235/

Wait, have you read any of them before? If not I appreciate the comments about the relationship between Timothy and Enzo. I’d thought it would have been necessary to have read the previous ones to get that. Thanks.

You're welcome! I'll definitely take a look at the previous stories when I get a chance. Thank you for the links!

-Vaperfox

Hah, the rope twists. :D I especially loved that description of Timothy standing, looking at Enzo, not willing to move or say anything because he might lose him. I've felt that feeling all too often.

Oops, a bit rusty on posting again. See below...

Thanks, it’s been interesting how people react so much to Timothy. And I like how situations like the one you mentioned show a bit of a character’s maturity at the same time their vulnerability and dependence on others.