I just uploaded an edited version of the story with a few small corrections.

Note To Anyone Who Saw The Version On Yiffstar
- There are rules... tips, really, but we call them rules... that all good writers know. One of them is, start the story in the middle of action. Since this is an action-horror short-short story, I started it right off in the middle of the protagonist running away. I stand by that decision. But when I tried to upload this story to Yiffstar, the system told me that it was 450 characters too short. I decided to add a quick and needless scene to the beginning of the story, (which I set apart with a # after the addition), so that it would load. I invite my readers to disregard that bit, or just read the above instead.

Hah! That didn't go as I expected...

Well where's the fun in it going where you expect?

Damn good! It was a nice teaser!

Thank you! And thanks again for the fave.

Amazing - lovely lovely plot twist makes up for the disappointment :D

Disappointment? You wanted vore?

Yeah, sorry about that. The theme section of the submission system doesn't really have any literary themes. Softcare vore was the closest I could come. Sorry to disappoint you.

You mean "General Art (Tame)"? I was reluctant to use that because searchers might think it was a picture. I guess it's as easy to apologize for my story not really being a picture as not really being vore, though. Thanks for the tip.

meh, the category's good as it be, arrr.

The categories on here are barely adequate for art, they don't work so great for stories at all. :P

I liked this, it was fun! I laughed.

Thank you very much! I'm glad you enjoyed it.

Oops... forgot to say thanks and I'm glad you enjoyed it.

That is the trait of a good author, they will make go one direction while leading you unknowingly to their desired conclusion.

bows

and yes, you are that good! I look forward to seeing more like this from you in the future

Tricky, otter. Very tricky.

It's the sort of trick that really only works at short-short length. Essentially, I was telling a joke; jokes can't be too long or you lose the audience before the punchline.

(Duh! Will I ever learn...) And thanks very much!

Well done- I loved the plot twist-- Had me laugh out loud! Thanks, my friend- I do really appreciate it... :)

d.m.f.

You're welcome. hugz Feel a little better now?

Yes. :)

d.m.f.

Hee! That was great -- you had me thinking, "Aww, I can't believe he would make a mindless killer/monster out of a ferret!" I should have known better.

Thank you for directing me to this. Maybe someday I'll put up some of my own written stories.

Ha! Gotcha! Glad you liked it, but I thought you would. Prejudice can be so silly!