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thank you guys so much! and tell me what you think! and if you buy it please no spoilers ;)
Also please support my Patreon! Chapter 3 is already in the works!
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Credits:
Red Equinox Creator, Plotter Writer and Artist : Gillpanda
Script/Story Editor and Proofreader: Ealadubh
Language Compiser: Solitude
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Category Artwork (Digital) / All
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Looking at the prior page, nice job there - wherein you have the child looking wide-eyed and sort of "forward". See, at first I thought it was to make the kid just look "cute", but now it has the other purpose of foreshadowing. :O You don't know about the Retinopathy until this page... but when he's first introduced, you can see him not looking straight up at his parents' faces.
I feel a very thought-out approach to the pacing of this comic. It's foreshadowed that Battu has bad memory, which makes a good connection to the lack of information present in the story but usurped from the comic itself. However, it is also foreshadowed that Battu struggles with emotional instability. Once that connection is made, you can also theorize that the missing frames instead represent the emotional instability of the child and how - with the overall importance of Battu in the story supposed universe - unstable the universe surrounding Battu is.
I figured as much after my comment, I'm used to seeing the stars being used as censoring words as symbols. Then hiding the characters name or using a keyword of a important characters name from the story, will be like a "Blinks" in between the name or a black bar covering the name. But I understand why the artist went that style to be less messy on the text. ( and sorry for the bad joke)
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