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ok so where do i start... well guess ill do the normal thing. and ill put who belongs to whome after. it was fun doing this one ^,...,^
on the left you got Tamashi
top row: sensei senpai, Amink, Hunter S.r, Hunter J.r, Solaire, Grougal, Rain, Adalwin nito and Iskander nito.
midle-ish row: Seth, Crush, Lemon, Kawa, Vepkhia, Azzurra.
last row: Viktor, Ixena, Hush, Manu, Cyril and Yowi
so lets just say that the guys wanted to see the photo, but when they sat that, Tamashi had a really bad after noon... and yes 2 furs had a gut fealing something was not right.
owner of sensei senpai, Solaire, Adalwin nito, Iskander nito, Lemon, Viktor, Cyril and Yowi
owner of Grougal, Vepkhia, Azzurra and manu
owner of Rain, Crush and Kawa
owner of Tamashi, Amink, Hunter S.r, Hunter J.r, Seth, Ixena and Hush
on the left you got Tamashi
top row: sensei senpai, Amink, Hunter S.r, Hunter J.r, Solaire, Grougal, Rain, Adalwin nito and Iskander nito.
midle-ish row: Seth, Crush, Lemon, Kawa, Vepkhia, Azzurra.
last row: Viktor, Ixena, Hush, Manu, Cyril and Yowi
so lets just say that the guys wanted to see the photo, but when they sat that, Tamashi had a really bad after noon... and yes 2 furs had a gut fealing something was not right.
owner of sensei senpai, Solaire, Adalwin nito, Iskander nito, Lemon, Viktor, Cyril and Yowi
owner of Grougal, Vepkhia, Azzurra and manu
owner of Rain, Crush and Kawa owner of Tamashi, Amink, Hunter S.r, Hunter J.r, Seth, Ixena and Hush
Category Artwork (Digital) / All
Species Unspecified / Any
Size 5100 x 2400px
File Size 6.69 MB
I find the effort in this art really good with all these characters you clearly put lots of time into making sure each one was done right however I think this could be improved quite a bit more.
firstly by the looks of the description there's no reason for everyone to be dressed the same. maybe you should have had them "naked" (obviously sfw naked) with their designs to add a good plethora of color and "pop" to the art. or vary up the clothing in some way. having everyone wear the same thing seems a bit unappealing as my eyes kinda blend it all together as one. It would be a good way to show off everyone's personality.
secondly the background seems a bit bland. its all one color for each object, I would suggest to add some shading or brightening tones to improve the environment. And one more thing I would like to say about the environment is that when you get closer to the characters the detail should get a bit more sharp and detailed (hinting the ground).
third I'd like to point out that some of the characters cut off other characters. and what I mean more specifically by this is that if you look around the legs and feet of some standing characters behind the sitting or kneeling characters you'll see their legs and/or feet just aren't there. But I could be wrong if they are standing in some weird, unnatural fashion. an easy way to stop that from happening in future photos is to just make a good sketch of a characters legs, body, ect, draw in the person or object in front of that character then erase whats getting covered.
Lastly I wanted to note that the shading and detailing on the phone lacks a bit and could be improved.
Overall this work suffers from a couple flaws but can easily be improved through some more time and effort. And If you put forth the effort to do just this I know you can make those edits for an even better piece!
firstly by the looks of the description there's no reason for everyone to be dressed the same. maybe you should have had them "naked" (obviously sfw naked) with their designs to add a good plethora of color and "pop" to the art. or vary up the clothing in some way. having everyone wear the same thing seems a bit unappealing as my eyes kinda blend it all together as one. It would be a good way to show off everyone's personality.
secondly the background seems a bit bland. its all one color for each object, I would suggest to add some shading or brightening tones to improve the environment. And one more thing I would like to say about the environment is that when you get closer to the characters the detail should get a bit more sharp and detailed (hinting the ground).
third I'd like to point out that some of the characters cut off other characters. and what I mean more specifically by this is that if you look around the legs and feet of some standing characters behind the sitting or kneeling characters you'll see their legs and/or feet just aren't there. But I could be wrong if they are standing in some weird, unnatural fashion. an easy way to stop that from happening in future photos is to just make a good sketch of a characters legs, body, ect, draw in the person or object in front of that character then erase whats getting covered.
Lastly I wanted to note that the shading and detailing on the phone lacks a bit and could be improved.
Overall this work suffers from a couple flaws but can easily be improved through some more time and effort. And If you put forth the effort to do just this I know you can make those edits for an even better piece!
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