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I AM SO SORRY FOR THE DELAY
(Also I have been encouraged to post public release notices so that non-patrons can comment and give feedback as well.)
Life has been a bit of a roller coaster lately so I'm struggling a bit to catch up.
Needless to say, my Repeat updating scheduling is completely messed up.
For future updates, I just continuously work on an update and release it as soon as it's ready instead of aiming for any specific deadline.
With some luck, I will be back to a monthly release cycle before long. Again, sorry for all the inconvenience! ;w;/
As for this new update, I have begun completely rewriting Owen's route starting from Day 9.
There were quite a few problems in the previous verion that I hope to fix in the new rewrite:
-While I'm sure many of you love Samuel's character, he had unfortunately taken center stage in Owen's route and overshadowed him as the main character.
Samuel will still play a pivitol role in the story, but hopefully not in a way to interferes with Owen's own character development.
-There's quite a few background details that I did not reveal in the previous version.
Without these details, Owen's actions in his route felt a bit asinine and unrelateable otherwise.
-I'm debating on removing Samuel's sex scene with Euca (the main character).
While I'm sure many of you enjoy it, the sex makes no sense within the story, and I hope the plot stays as uninfluenced by the need for sex appeal as possible.
To make up for it, I might end up making small comics or illustrations of lewd!Samuel outside of the game.
-There was a rather....lack of emotional connection with Owen in the previous version that I hope to improve upon in the rewrite.
Please let me know your thoughts on the new rewrite! If you have any comments or suggestions, leave a comment! I may not reply to all of them, but rest assured that I read every single one. Your feedback is what helps me improve Repeat! :)
Changelog:
-Owen's route rewrite: Day 9 is now 70% complete
-New Owen sprites!
-A little history lession.
-New CG artwork!
-Grammar and spelling fixes.
I AM SO SORRY FOR THE DELAY
(Also I have been encouraged to post public release notices so that non-patrons can comment and give feedback as well.)
Life has been a bit of a roller coaster lately so I'm struggling a bit to catch up.
Needless to say, my Repeat updating scheduling is completely messed up.
For future updates, I just continuously work on an update and release it as soon as it's ready instead of aiming for any specific deadline.
With some luck, I will be back to a monthly release cycle before long. Again, sorry for all the inconvenience! ;w;/
As for this new update, I have begun completely rewriting Owen's route starting from Day 9.
There were quite a few problems in the previous verion that I hope to fix in the new rewrite:
-While I'm sure many of you love Samuel's character, he had unfortunately taken center stage in Owen's route and overshadowed him as the main character.
Samuel will still play a pivitol role in the story, but hopefully not in a way to interferes with Owen's own character development.
-There's quite a few background details that I did not reveal in the previous version.
Without these details, Owen's actions in his route felt a bit asinine and unrelateable otherwise.
-I'm debating on removing Samuel's sex scene with Euca (the main character).
While I'm sure many of you enjoy it, the sex makes no sense within the story, and I hope the plot stays as uninfluenced by the need for sex appeal as possible.
To make up for it, I might end up making small comics or illustrations of lewd!Samuel outside of the game.
-There was a rather....lack of emotional connection with Owen in the previous version that I hope to improve upon in the rewrite.
Please let me know your thoughts on the new rewrite! If you have any comments or suggestions, leave a comment! I may not reply to all of them, but rest assured that I read every single one. Your feedback is what helps me improve Repeat! :)
Changelog:
-Owen's route rewrite: Day 9 is now 70% complete
-New Owen sprites!
-A little history lession.
-New CG artwork!
-Grammar and spelling fixes.
Category Artwork (Digital) / All
Species Unspecified / Any
Size 1015 x 794px
File Size 152.7 kB
[This is a serious Though of mine and have spoilers, you been warned]
Shiro... i will be honest.... the rewrite contradicts with what the "Spirit" says of Owen
Owen is supposed to be completely gentle, thats why he needed to be saved by Phillip because he dont defends himself properly... but this Owen... isnt very like the warning we got.
This rewrite.... honestly i didnt like it. The action was nice and part of what was explained there could be added to future days but it didnt give me the same strong feelings that i loved of his story. The rewrite practically kill a lot of the suspense that i got from the original.
The original filled me with so much great feelings.... the rewrite not.
another thing: PLEASE! please... Dont remove Samuel!!!!!! The original story match all and the rewrite not exactly.
Please keep the original one, just add part of the rewrite (and the art) on it or whatever you like with it but seriously please keep the original.
Hope you read my comment
Shiro... i will be honest.... the rewrite contradicts with what the "Spirit" says of Owen
Owen is supposed to be completely gentle, thats why he needed to be saved by Phillip because he dont defends himself properly... but this Owen... isnt very like the warning we got.
This rewrite.... honestly i didnt like it. The action was nice and part of what was explained there could be added to future days but it didnt give me the same strong feelings that i loved of his story. The rewrite practically kill a lot of the suspense that i got from the original.
The original filled me with so much great feelings.... the rewrite not.
another thing: PLEASE! please... Dont remove Samuel!!!!!! The original story match all and the rewrite not exactly.
Please keep the original one, just add part of the rewrite (and the art) on it or whatever you like with it but seriously please keep the original.
Hope you read my comment
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