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:D A trio of light haikus I've written in the past week. One's "Absence Felt", one's "Aging", and the last one's "Cooking".
Hope ya like 'em. ^u^; Would like to hear what people think would make 'em better too.
For those who can't read the file:
Three Haikus
“Absence Felt”
When one goes missing
we feel it; it’s time for soup,
so where is the spoon?
“Aging”
Kid fears bed-time dark;
Teen stays out ‘til 2 a.m.;
Old guy takes a nap.
“Cooking”
The only art that
involves Andouille and rice
is quite a fine art.
Hope ya like 'em. ^u^; Would like to hear what people think would make 'em better too.
For those who can't read the file:
Three Haikus
“Absence Felt”
When one goes missing
we feel it; it’s time for soup,
so where is the spoon?
“Aging”
Kid fears bed-time dark;
Teen stays out ‘til 2 a.m.;
Old guy takes a nap.
“Cooking”
The only art that
involves Andouille and rice
is quite a fine art.
Category Poetry / Miscellaneous
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