Liking this series so far, I really am. Only suggestion I have is to maybe switch from a handwritten font to something put in digitally, since it can be hard to read it as it is.

My handwriting sucks. Dx That's my attempt at making it readable. ><

And holycrap <3 your new icon. Leo is loff.

Yeah, that's probably why I can actually read the writing here, because my handwriting is even worse and I'm used to reading that :P

Still, maybe even just ink it to make the letters darker, that would make it much easier to read.

And thanks, I love it too

I'll take that into consideration! I just started finishing the fourth page yesterday and I should have it up tomorrow unless I died. ..or forgot.

FUTURE-TENSE FAIL

Oh, I forgot to say thanks. xD Oops.

THANK YOU! :D

Creeeeepy. I like it...you should do some rad inkwork on it :)

Thanks! I'd love to, but my inkwork is fail. :/

Love your story so far! I like how you portray the little boy, and I'm curious to see where you go with dad.

OH! If you want a tip for sprucing up your sketchwork with minimum effort, see if you can find Bienfang gridded paper. It has all the lines of grafting paper (the better to make neat and even rows and such) but when you scan them into a computer or photo copy them, the lines don't show up!

Thanks! The story won't delve too deep with the dad 'coz Joey's gonna end up going into the plushy-world-thing (Bonds of String, whoopee!), but yeah, he'll show up in nightmares and things fo' sure.

That is wicked cool that the lines don't scan. xD I dunno how that would help, though, 'coz I can't stand drawing on lines and I don't like perfect boxes. xD;; Thanks for the suggestion, though!