Schwarzpelz - Chapter 2 - Part 27
By now, these pages seem kinda far away, I barely remember drawing them x3; To me, Schwarzi has explained a lot of stuff already and I'm thinking about ending the chapter soon, might let these pages cage up a little before I continue.
I kinda... don't like how this page turned out so much x3 I don't know, feels a bit empty compared to others, but hey, next pages will be cool again :3
Hope you still like it
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I kinda... don't like how this page turned out so much x3 I don't know, feels a bit empty compared to others, but hey, next pages will be cool again :3
Hope you still like it
Art, Schwarzpelz © me
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Welp. He's dead. End of the comic goodbye. We warned him not to make him angry, but he did and he's dead now. Night night. See you later. All those questions will never be answered, the next page is a paw crushing him and a black panel.
Of course this isn't the end, but it would be funny if it did end that way. Just a blank page of black.
Of course this isn't the end, but it would be funny if it did end that way. Just a blank page of black.
....Meep. *Awaits the wrath of mega fluff lord*
If i was being a super critical douche, I'd say this page is a bit flat in the dialogue department. Chakki just got swallowed, regurgitated and is now standing next to the sister that just did both of those things, and now he's arguing with a MASSIVE wolf about saving her: Chakki's character is kinda all over the place.
Sorry if that's a bit over critical, this is still an amazing comic, but I just wanted to give some critique. :/ take it or leave it, I don't mind.
If i was being a super critical douche, I'd say this page is a bit flat in the dialogue department. Chakki just got swallowed, regurgitated and is now standing next to the sister that just did both of those things, and now he's arguing with a MASSIVE wolf about saving her: Chakki's character is kinda all over the place.
Sorry if that's a bit over critical, this is still an amazing comic, but I just wanted to give some critique. :/ take it or leave it, I don't mind.
hehe, I don't mind critique x3
Some of it is true, some of it explains itself if you pay close attention to the little details and some stuff is written between the lines or won't be thoroughly explained at all.
on top of that, I don't want to develop the characters for ever. the chapter's been going on long enough as it is and there are still many more pages coming before it ends xd
Some of it is true, some of it explains itself if you pay close attention to the little details and some stuff is written between the lines or won't be thoroughly explained at all.
on top of that, I don't want to develop the characters for ever. the chapter's been going on long enough as it is and there are still many more pages coming before it ends xd
Well, this seems like an appropriate link. https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=9wgUuIRvA-k
Also, love little sis' expression when he says that. She realizes how screwed they are right now.
Also, love little sis' expression when he says that. She realizes how screwed they are right now.
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