I had a feeling this was going to happen when I saw the picture yesterday.

So did I.

Let me guess, the muse told you to get a movin'.

Just finished reading. This is starting to look interesting.

excellent read

Good god man! Do you ever take a break? It seems that you just finished writing the end to Winter's Shard, and now this fine piece of literature?!?

And away we go!

I think I'm starting to figure out another reason Nohni has a whip... Nohni: "Did I say you could stop? Get back to work!" *SNAP!*

Too true.
But then she's got me figured out as a writer.

Seems that if I post the first chapter to a 'forum' such as FA, it means I'll actually finish the story. I've got quite a few 'first chapters' lying around that have never gone beyond that. However, once I post the chapter, Nohni knows I'll finish the story because I have this old fashioned notion that I must complete something I start when other people (the readers) are expecting it.

And I did change it from 'Right' to 'Rite'. (Need to refresh the browser to see the change) Since the story deals a lot with ritual, I think 'Rite' is the right word.

Whoops. Posted the above to the wrong post.

That's alright, actually gave me a heads-up so I could update the article on Nohni on Wikifur. Will you be posting that colored version of her parents that you used as a thumbnail?

My immediate reaction on reading the last sentence was: "Oh, CRAP!"

I always enjoy Nohni. Part of that is the fact that my best friend, of more than 37 years standing, is an archaeologist, and some of that has rubbed off over the decades.

This looks to be a fascinating story. I'm looking forward to the rest of it.

Steve Gallacci already has used this title for a comic series that he ran. a fairly good one, I might add.

Try Goolging "Birth Right Story Title"
Ten Million hits.
Yep.
Been used before.
Although with most others. it's a single word. Not two.
I am, however, thinking about changing the last word to 'Rite' instead of 'Right' to indicate a 'ritual' rather than an 'inheritance'.

And I did change it from 'Right' to 'Rite'. (Need to refresh the browser to see the change) Since the story deals a lot with ritual, I think 'Rite' is the right word.

First time I've been able to read through someone's story since.... (*Shrug*) Well, in a while.

Looking forward to seeing where this goes.

Wild start, C. Glad to see Raven and Hazen getting to display their brainy-bits here. Nohni has some great allies.


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Good start. Thanks Cirrel!

Huh, and here I thought that Set killed Osiris because he was just a mean, evil jerk. The best part about your stories is that I learn a thing or two here and there.

Heheh. So do I. The research is half the fun.