Yea, This prompt sparked this small quick scene but not much else. Im looking foward to more prompts and will attempt to do them every week.
Category Story / All
Species Canine (Other)
Size 120 x 86px
File Size 2 kB
Nice. Short, simple, sweet, charming. Very nice little tale. The story is short and simple, but rather enjoyable. I read the two characters as two brothers, going to cinema to see a movie. The little fellow is quite charming. You might want to consider submitting in .txt, as your formatting is rather simple. You would probably get more readers without the obligatory downloading every time somebody is going to read your story. Also, there are quite a few little spelling errors in your story, typing errors, I presume, they could have been avoided with a short proofreading. It shows a better picture of yourself if at least the spelling is correct in most parts. But all in all, the tale is rather good, I enjoyed reading it, it put smile to my face. It had childhood enthusiasm and charm of old-style cinema theaters in it. Well done.
This is your first Thursday Prompt response, yes? If this is the case: Welcome! Welcome to the Thursday Prompts. Hopefully you enjoy your time with the prompts, both writing and reading.
This is your first Thursday Prompt response, yes? If this is the case: Welcome! Welcome to the Thursday Prompts. Hopefully you enjoy your time with the prompts, both writing and reading.
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