its pretty sweet i think! (will be redone dont worry!!!)

Lyrics:

Lost in a trapped World,
The paths are closer to me now..
Dreams to be in a beautiful nightmare,
amongst a fallen world..

Lost in time...
there's no end to this Agony!
Feelin' the pain rise inside my soul!!!

Ethernity..!
I can Feel stars falling all around me!
Ethernity!
Feelin the flames blase inside me!

Whhhhaaaaaaaooooo!

The darkness, is rising, in the shadows
of my soul! Panic's Everywhere,
Blinded in fear, of the Void!
I must follow, The voices, inside my head,
to break the curse, that binds us to the ends,
of space ant time!

Ethernity..!
Feelin' the stars fall all around me!
Ethernity..!
Flames rising higher inside my soul!

No regression,
in Societies last hopes!
I cant remember,
Who i was before...
in the end of days,
of a fallen world,,!

(SOLOS him/bothe/me/both)

Ethernity..!
I can Feel stars falling all around me!
Ethernity!
Feelin the flames blase inside me!

Ethernity..!
Feelin' the stars fall all around me!
Ethernity..!
Flames rising higher inside my soul!

Flames in me rise higher!! Woooooooooooaaaaaa!



Thats muh song, whatcha think?? (I KNOW IT NEEDS BASS and i ALSO know that the the chois are loud at points XD!!!)

but the idea overall??