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≫heh i literally don't know what i should put in the text box.if it sounds corny to you please ignore it :T
≫i will change those dialogs later.
(for those who has read this comic i want to ask you!)
the continuation of my comic "Blast!!''
here's the comic.(warning! it looks like crap! it was made when i started using a drawing pad anyway)
https://u18chan.com/board/u18chan/gc/topic/1199553
I've been wanting to continue it this one year! but i just can't due to several circumstances.
well anyway what do you think about the first page?
i watched youtube tutorials on how to tone your manga.
it looks simple AF but when i do it, it just looks wrong.(i suck at drawing buildings anyway)
should i color it?
i would only color them in the shading area though.there's an option to do that.it's easy :T
i will be making 8 pages of this including this one.
so for those who has read this comic i want to ask you, do you want me to post this comic once a page is finished or wait until i finished all of them and then post them all at once?
(if this is left unanswered the i'll go with the second option)
≫heh i literally don't know what i should put in the text box.if it sounds corny to you please ignore it :T
≫i will change those dialogs later.
(for those who has read this comic i want to ask you!)
the continuation of my comic "Blast!!''
here's the comic.(warning! it looks like crap! it was made when i started using a drawing pad anyway)
https://u18chan.com/board/u18chan/gc/topic/1199553
I've been wanting to continue it this one year! but i just can't due to several circumstances.
well anyway what do you think about the first page?
i watched youtube tutorials on how to tone your manga.
it looks simple AF but when i do it, it just looks wrong.(i suck at drawing buildings anyway)
should i color it?
i would only color them in the shading area though.there's an option to do that.it's easy :T
i will be making 8 pages of this including this one.
so for those who has read this comic i want to ask you, do you want me to post this comic once a page is finished or wait until i finished all of them and then post them all at once?
(if this is left unanswered the i'll go with the second option)
Category All / Comics
Species Unspecified / Any
Size 905 x 1280px
File Size 262.5 kB
okay based on the first comic, i hardly want to read it until finish (sorry for rude opinion). The reason because there're too much text, it's like naration, keep the dialog simple and summarize all of them, so yeah i dont know the whole story, i'll read it throughly later. My concern is the dialog is too long, keep it short and informative
meh it's nothing ;)
i don't know...i don't think i will change that.(kinda hard to explain this so i don't know how to say it) it depends on what appears in my head.once i got the idea of how the script would be like, i plan them in ways i can imagine like drawing the things correspond with the dialog then put in the panel as necessary as possible.i also want to save time by not drawing unnecessary things so i put the dialog where they speak.except if they have a reaction time then it is optional to use a dialog or not.
i don't know...i don't think i will change that.(kinda hard to explain this so i don't know how to say it) it depends on what appears in my head.once i got the idea of how the script would be like, i plan them in ways i can imagine like drawing the things correspond with the dialog then put in the panel as necessary as possible.i also want to save time by not drawing unnecessary things so i put the dialog where they speak.except if they have a reaction time then it is optional to use a dialog or not.
Actually i laugh at it XD
Romance, friendship with bit humor. Overall it's good for a beginning i guess, the leftover is about how to compose and put them together. Also some panel looks "empty", well it's like you can put something like short information so it can cut off the length of the dialog on the other page or panel perhaps. Well it just my opinion because it looks more comfortable reading comic with less of wall of text.
Waiting for the sequel though XD wanna know the continuation of the story
Romance, friendship with bit humor. Overall it's good for a beginning i guess, the leftover is about how to compose and put them together. Also some panel looks "empty", well it's like you can put something like short information so it can cut off the length of the dialog on the other page or panel perhaps. Well it just my opinion because it looks more comfortable reading comic with less of wall of text.
Waiting for the sequel though XD wanna know the continuation of the story
meh don't expect much from it :T there's only gonna be 8 pages of it.i'll see the reaction of this from people (in that site i showed you).if it's little i think i'll stop making more or wait until i'm motivated to make more. (i have many things i want to draw).i made this continuation to practice manga studio anyway.
Yea, finally... it lives!!!
WOW, you have improved a lot. It's the first side and it looks like... like you near profesional. If I think at the first pages and now I look at this side... simple, but fantastic!
I look forward how your comic and your stile more and more improve and the story will progress~
Please post the comic pages, once a page is finished... pleeeeasse~
WOW, you have improved a lot. It's the first side and it looks like... like you near profesional. If I think at the first pages and now I look at this side... simple, but fantastic!
I look forward how your comic and your stile more and more improve and the story will progress~
Please post the comic pages, once a page is finished... pleeeeasse~
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