I rather like how you wrote action in this one. A real page turner!

Outstanding! So good to hear that the interest and anticipation is high. Thank you mchly for the comments!

Outstanding! So good to hear that the interest and anticipation is high. Thank you mchly for the comments!

Well that certainly built up a lot of anticipation to see what happens next. Poor stuffed wuffy! You're not supposed to get run over by mini vans. ^^()

Ah! So the "cliff-hanger" worked! *grins* Vargr hopes he managed to keep interest and emotional involvement high. It's been fun writing this saga.

You definitely did, on both fronts. :3

oh bo ho ho... *stops*yeah right can't wait to read the next one though! I love the detail, and the series is a great read! heck, you could make a comic on it!

*snickers* Hey, wuff thought it was a touching bit of writing there! *smiles* But very glad this story is proving to be so entertaining!

Only problem with making it a comic is the need to be able to draw - that's somethng this wuff has very very little talent for.

However, should any artists feel inspired to draw a panel or two from any of Vargr' stories, you KNOW wuff wouldn't stand in their way! *grins*

hear hear!!

*sighs* The end to this chapter always makes me sad. I already know what happens, and I still had to hold back a tear after reading!

*smiles* Wuff is sorry for the tear, but happy that the writing can evoke such strong emotion. *hugs* So glad you inspired this wuff to take this story up!