Haha, I like it. That's clever!

Thank you ^.^

I thought it needed a good voice.

Okay, that was clever. It took me a paragraph or two to figure out what was going on.

Very, very clever. I liked this a lot. My only regret is that I figured the story out while reading the second paragraph. Ah, my corkscrew imagination... Anyway, this is really a treat, a great little letter, short and witty, delicious little piece to be devoured. I enjoyed reading this very much, I was very entertained, I chuckled all the way after I figured the gag. Great work.

Thank you. That's high and profuse praise ^.^

You're the second person to figure it out early and mention it, it seems. i might have to be a little more subtle next time. :P

*giggles and claps her paws*

Classic! That's such a cute idea! I must admit that seeing in the comments it was some sort of little gag helped me to figure out the exact gag after the first paragraph, but it's still a lovely little read! Kudos! =~.^=

Thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed it.

Now that was just plain cute, and a really good twist on the prompt. Very nicely done...

*hugs...

V.

Yay! Cute is good. Thanks

^.^

thank you very much Ravin...

V.

I like the twist. I felt the story could have used a little more sizzle in the details, maybe played a little with the imagery and really contrasted the wild v.s. useful nature of the character.

I think I did okay with it. I wasn't aiming for something too long, or it might have been even more obvious. With more length, yes, it could have been more developed though.

I liked it but what does it mean when it is a "story promt"?

lol and i didnt get it till the 5th read... luckily there was these comments to let me know something was up. I have never read much but I am really getting into it now.

Reading is good. I actually teach people to read at KR all the time. I have a really cute lesson that I use, and I love teaching it. It's a worthwhile skill.

KR?

Knight Realms. It's a live acting game I play located in New Jersey. It's a lot of fun, and I really enjoy it.

Sounds like fun but I don't like being in front of people...

So play a rogue and hide :P