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A quick note. I've decided, as a time saver for myself, I will not be writing in Treshaun's heavy accent, at least not for this chapter. I apologize if this breaks any level of realism or whatever for my readers, but it really is difficult trying to write his heavy Jamaican accent/Patois speech. So basically, I just ask you to try and imagine his speech patterns as you read.
This was written with some help from
, who helped portray Stefan for me.
A quick note. I've decided, as a time saver for myself, I will not be writing in Treshaun's heavy accent, at least not for this chapter. I apologize if this breaks any level of realism or whatever for my readers, but it really is difficult trying to write his heavy Jamaican accent/Patois speech. So basically, I just ask you to try and imagine his speech patterns as you read.
This was written with some help from
, who helped portray Stefan for me.
Category Story / Miscellaneous
Species Goat
Size 120 x 109px
File Size 9.6 kB
This is gonna sound very weird: This is so not-Betsie is great.
What I mean is that you took a risk, something new and exotic and it really works out. Is vibrant and fresh. Enjoyable,you're proving you can take a new direction and make it happen nicely.
# Accent is a tough one to pull, but it wasn'ta big deal for me, did not break realism. It can fit, or it can get grating very fast. Many end up speaking like they have a sock in their mouths or are very "dim" and it becomes tiring to read. What you can do is add patterns, use words you feel they'd use. Corner cut while making it easy.
Keep it up!
What I mean is that you took a risk, something new and exotic and it really works out. Is vibrant and fresh. Enjoyable,you're proving you can take a new direction and make it happen nicely.
# Accent is a tough one to pull, but it wasn'ta big deal for me, did not break realism. It can fit, or it can get grating very fast. Many end up speaking like they have a sock in their mouths or are very "dim" and it becomes tiring to read. What you can do is add patterns, use words you feel they'd use. Corner cut while making it easy.
Keep it up!
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