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Samael sure loves to point at things doesn't she?
Hmm, had to re-read the third panel a bit as it was a little hard at first to tell what speech bubble came in what order (and that two of them were being said by the same person in a row). Not sure what Hershey is implying in that last speech bubble, she's kinda throwing Barbara under the bus there, especially considering she just met Samael.
P.S. ..... maybe you should have checked them 101 times, I saw a few errors.
Panel 2: "called" should be "call"
Panel 3: "fells" should be "fell"
Panel 5: The "you guys know how I get when I have a little drink" is kinda disjointed, though depending how you want to say it there would be various ways to re-write it, one way is "you guys know how I get when I have had a little to drink" but there would be several other ways to fix it too.
Hmm, had to re-read the third panel a bit as it was a little hard at first to tell what speech bubble came in what order (and that two of them were being said by the same person in a row). Not sure what Hershey is implying in that last speech bubble, she's kinda throwing Barbara under the bus there, especially considering she just met Samael.
P.S. ..... maybe you should have checked them 101 times, I saw a few errors.
Panel 2: "called" should be "call"
Panel 3: "fells" should be "fell"
Panel 5: The "you guys know how I get when I have a little drink" is kinda disjointed, though depending how you want to say it there would be various ways to re-write it, one way is "you guys know how I get when I have had a little to drink" but there would be several other ways to fix it too.
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