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A commissioned piece for everyone's favorite bunny trio!
Category All / All
Species Rabbit / Hare
Size 541 x 700px
File Size 208.9 kB
Absolutely love this!! Definately one of my absolute favourites of your works
Anyway, since you want critism.. the only thing that I see is that yellow bunnys tail shouldn't be visible, but you've been pretty much aware of that, and since it's toony, that doesn't matter anyway.
The pose of the blue bunny could be more clear and have a more easily readable silhouette. The hands are in front of his body. Putting them somewhere else and creating negative space could make it appear more interesting and make the pose more clear.
The good stuff:
pretty much everything. The paper you drew it on is awesome, I totally love their facial expression and the composition you chose was probably pretty logical, but yeah.. awesome :)
Anyway, since you want critism.. the only thing that I see is that yellow bunnys tail shouldn't be visible, but you've been pretty much aware of that, and since it's toony, that doesn't matter anyway.
The pose of the blue bunny could be more clear and have a more easily readable silhouette. The hands are in front of his body. Putting them somewhere else and creating negative space could make it appear more interesting and make the pose more clear.
The good stuff:
pretty much everything. The paper you drew it on is awesome, I totally love their facial expression and the composition you chose was probably pretty logical, but yeah.. awesome :)
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