So very sad...

But beautifully written. :)

Thanks.

You and Metassus have such a way of wanting to make me cry... I loved it T... please keep this series going... but maybe make me smile next time(?).

*gives him such a large hug...

V.

Yeah, well maybe he's due for some nice things in his life. We'll just have to see what the next prompt has in store for him.

Thanks, good to know this one actually stands on its own, and here’s to hoping you find the time to read the others.

A marvelous, marvelous story. So sad, yet uplifting.

Ah, that’s exactly the tone I was aiming for. Nice to know I hit the mark, not easy to tell for sure until the reviews start coming in.

(wanders off with a big cat grin on his face)

So sad :(

I will say that i really liked the use of various species and diversity in the story and the use of an adorable cougar kitten such as myself :)

The story was very emotionally moving.

Thanks.

Without a doubt, one of the finest series of tales I've read in FA.
I'm being consistent in my praise here. :) This one is really something.

Uh, thanks. *blushes*

This is a nice sad and sweet vignette and I like the bit of ghostly atmosphere to it. I've sent you an e-mail on using this one for my dramatic horror book as well. Please drop me a line on it.

Will Sanborn, will[at]was1.net

You caught me off guard, T. I was pleased to see Timothy getting older and bigger, and was wondering how you would explore the relationship between him and his grandfather. I felt fairly certain I knew where the story was going when he heard the crying from under the bridge. When I realized what the rabbit was implying, I had to stop for a moment. Everything I had assumed about the story changed in mere seconds, and I had to let go of my expectations. I had to wait and see what you were going to do with Timothy and the bunny.

I love it when an author gives the reader that mental exercise of having to refigure everything that's been presumed. Keeps us on our toes.

Very nicely done, as well. In my opinion you have many of the earmarks of a professional writer.

You make it sound as if I know what I’m doing. Silly wolf…

Thanks for the kind words, and yeah I like those ‘Oh’ moments in stories that changes everything. Good to know I got this one right.

You certainly took things in a new direction with this chapter. I never saw this coming, but it came as a pleasant surprise.

Thanks.

"I see dead people."

Very interesting. This seems as a twisting point in your Timothy "saga", the first one is sad, but after that there are numerous charming tales following the life of the young Timothy, I truly liked them, they filled me with sunshine and childish curiosity. This story, on the other hand, seems more serious to me, it's great to see Timothy continues his life, although he suffers for his loss. In a way, this compares very well with the previous story where Timothy has his illusion or insight of previous lifes, as something paranormal happens in this tale as well, or at least that is how I read it.

You're touch to the theme is very good, the quality of this literal work is amazing, the story is very entertaining and easy to follow. I enjoyed it, although I miss the charm of the previous parts of the series. How long it has been since I read the previous? Two weeks. I guess I have been missing as well this thread of stories. I have deliberately left the newer ones unread to read them all in the order of submission. So, some day you will get a load of feedback from me. I intend to read every single TP response individually.

Anyway, the story is great, I enjoyed it, although, the story is different from the previous tales in the continuation. Great little piece.

Thanks, I'll not spoil it for you then.

It seems like Timothy's "gift" would be interesting to have, but I wonder if it's one of those things that would feel more like a curse if you actually had it, especially at such a young age. Great piece, and it made me feel good. I just read this in the "Alone in the Dark" book, and I must say, that's just too cool that your prompt pieces got published. I envy you...even though it's one of the seven deadly sins.

I’m actually trying to come at it from the point of view that it just is for him. Neither gift nor curse but simply something different about him, and Enzo too although he has a different ability I still haven’t decided what it is. Waiting for the right prompt to figure that out.

Oh and keep at it, you’ll get published soon, you’re good enough for it.

Thanks for the vote of confidence.

I think I missed this one somehow, and what a shame! So Timothy's story, while remaining melancholy, takes a turn for the supernatural? Intriguing! I'm now looking to the next installment without my normal sense of dread at your Timothy stories. :D

Thanks, but sense of dread?

The impending sense of dread of, "Oh God, it's a Timothy story, I'm going to end up crying again. ;_;" The previous story cheered me up considerably, that things might be looking up for young Tim. :3 They're certainly better than they were.