this is on my to read list

Now that was an interesting addition to the story. Good job on further developing the life of Timothy.

Thanks, I always try to make it interesting.

Even without having read the previous It still stands on it's own as a meaningful piece.

Good to know, I’m never quite sure how well each piece stands on its own.

"To see with unjaded eyes is the gift if the new" -Unknown

Lovely and deep and delicately depressing towards the end. It brings back emotions to me, TS, so I commend your work. You get a star. * It links very nicely to the previous.

Delicately depressing, that’s a new one. Thanks for the star.

I think delicately depressing is a good term... linked very well, and I am trying not to cry...

*gives the Cat a hug...


V.

Thanks, and here’s a hankie *holds out a kleenex*

*smiles... thinking about shoving it somewhere for making it so sad... but just blows her nose loudly...

V.

Beautiful. Delicate is a good word, crystalline even. I especially like the sense of all of that life coming together when free of the physical.

Oh shit. When I read the description and saw what other prompt this was related to, I immediately choked up and started going, "No, no, no!" My eyes are watery; goddamn you. D:

I hate you so much. ;_____;

The out-of-body/past life travel was fantastically envigorating and cleverly confusing. Actually, the only question I have is whether his actual dad is the weasel, or if that was from a past life.

Of course, if little Timothy hasn't DIED, then maybe, just maybe, his new life without his mother is a good thing? Why must you torture the boy so? DX

*chuckles at your misery*

And yes the weasel was his dad. We’ll see what happens to him with the next prompt, and if what his experience has done to him will show up…

Wow... Intense. Powerful. Abstract. Touching. The idea of the past lifes is pretty interesting, as is the imagery during the part where Timothy briefly visits these old memories. And this piece has a good amount of foreshadowing, all the strings are not tied, it makes me to wait to read the next prompt. Great short story, I enjoyed reading this.

Thanks.

I thought this was brilliantly done. It almost reminded me of an abstract painting put into words.