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Serpenna ©
Siriky: Serp has a lawyer suit and a nice brushed hair as well! Told you this would look great ^^ or at least thinking that.
Enjoy
Serpenna ©
Siriky: Serp has a lawyer suit and a nice brushed hair as well! Told you this would look great ^^ or at least thinking that.
Enjoy
Category Artwork (Traditional) / All
Species Dragon (Other)
Size 1098 x 1280px
File Size 207.7 kB
Listed in Folders
Hey ^^ sorry I haven't dropped any critique in a while, I been a little tied up.
I hope you're very pleased with this piece because honestly I think it's one of your best :D
The angle on the face is really nice, it gives the whole image that little bit of extra dimension.
Also the arm which is resting on the brief case looks really good, you got a good angle going on there too.
The only thing that really troubles me is the feet... please don't get me wrong, they're not bad, but I feel that maybe they could have a little bit more shape to them.
And perhaps the trousers could have a few folds and ruffles in them to show the softness of the fabric.... like what you done in the creases under the knees :)
All in all though I think yo done a really good job on this ^_^ you are certainly improving with each piece you draw.
I hope you're very pleased with this piece because honestly I think it's one of your best :D
The angle on the face is really nice, it gives the whole image that little bit of extra dimension.
Also the arm which is resting on the brief case looks really good, you got a good angle going on there too.
The only thing that really troubles me is the feet... please don't get me wrong, they're not bad, but I feel that maybe they could have a little bit more shape to them.
And perhaps the trousers could have a few folds and ruffles in them to show the softness of the fabric.... like what you done in the creases under the knees :)
All in all though I think yo done a really good job on this ^_^ you are certainly improving with each piece you draw.
I thank you for this comment, thank you. As for the art image here I can say this.
I have been looking at many images of a lawyer suit like this one kinda http://www.furaffinity.net/view/8796418 but I needed to try and do an anthro version for Serpenna to wear and this is the result. And yes I am very pleased with this piece except the right arm that I could have done much better -_- I am happy that the left arm resting on the brief case is looking good :) About the feet I think I can see what you’re talk about. *looks at the feet* I wanted to draw them relaxed and not tense as nothing is going on here and Serp is taking it easy and enjoying his lollipop there. I could surely have added a few folds to the trousers but looking at other images they don’t really have any from what I can see when I looked around.
Improving is something I do aim for once in a while if not mostly aiming for fun and hope to learn something from it ^^ maybe.
Thank you Neo *hug*
I have been looking at many images of a lawyer suit like this one kinda http://www.furaffinity.net/view/8796418 but I needed to try and do an anthro version for Serpenna to wear and this is the result. And yes I am very pleased with this piece except the right arm that I could have done much better -_- I am happy that the left arm resting on the brief case is looking good :) About the feet I think I can see what you’re talk about. *looks at the feet* I wanted to draw them relaxed and not tense as nothing is going on here and Serp is taking it easy and enjoying his lollipop there. I could surely have added a few folds to the trousers but looking at other images they don’t really have any from what I can see when I looked around.
Improving is something I do aim for once in a while if not mostly aiming for fun and hope to learn something from it ^^ maybe.
Thank you Neo *hug*
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