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I've been trying to figure out my own 'comic style' as it were, with the intent that (some day? Maybe?) I could run my own web-comic.
It's still a long way off, I'm sure, but I'm having fun trying to develop my style. Here's my latest.
This was inspired by a friend that I chat with on IRC while I'm at work. My character is a dragon (as most of you know), while his character is a Kitsune. He plays a very playful, curious, and often prankish kitsune, and often likes to jump up on my virtual head and ask what I'm doing. Hence this comic.
It's still a long way off, I'm sure, but I'm having fun trying to develop my style. Here's my latest.
This was inspired by a friend that I chat with on IRC while I'm at work. My character is a dragon (as most of you know), while his character is a Kitsune. He plays a very playful, curious, and often prankish kitsune, and often likes to jump up on my virtual head and ask what I'm doing. Hence this comic.
Category All / Comics
Species Western Dragon
Size 571 x 557px
File Size 86.6 kB
Looks quite good. :)
Although I've got some little critics:
What I first saw, was that I saw nothing... His second (right) arm is missing. ;)
A little shading would make it look much more "deep" and less 2-dimensional, I guess.
Not too long ago, you wrote something abot "little details" that give a Picture "soul"... Some parts here (monitor-picture) are extremely detailed, while other areas (T-Shirt, Chair, Background) dont even have ANY detail.
Maybe you should try finding a middle-way between "extremely detailed" and "no details". The Head looks like a very good step into that direction. There are enough details for being nice to look at, but not too detailed to disharmony with the rest of the pic.
Awww - damn the criticism:
A quite nice pic you did here. You improved your skills a lot since the last time.
Keep going. You're on the right way. :)
Greez
Kami
Although I've got some little critics:
What I first saw, was that I saw nothing... His second (right) arm is missing. ;)
A little shading would make it look much more "deep" and less 2-dimensional, I guess.
Not too long ago, you wrote something abot "little details" that give a Picture "soul"... Some parts here (monitor-picture) are extremely detailed, while other areas (T-Shirt, Chair, Background) dont even have ANY detail.
Maybe you should try finding a middle-way between "extremely detailed" and "no details". The Head looks like a very good step into that direction. There are enough details for being nice to look at, but not too detailed to disharmony with the rest of the pic.
Awww - damn the criticism:
A quite nice pic you did here. You improved your skills a lot since the last time.
Keep going. You're on the right way. :)
Greez
Kami
That's some great feedback, Kami! :D
Yeah, the computer screen is actually a direct screenshot from my computer screen here at work; that's why it came out with so much detail. I realize now I could've gotten by with sketching a few boxes and lines in the screen space.
Thanks!
Yeah, the computer screen is actually a direct screenshot from my computer screen here at work; that's why it came out with so much detail. I realize now I could've gotten by with sketching a few boxes and lines in the screen space.
Thanks!
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