Another update. Probably more in the next couple days.

"Besides if I were to loose you who would keep me on schedule during patrol?"

Shouldn't it be lose?

A few more typos that I found, but over all an interesting beginning. Where do you plan to go with this?

I expect typos here and there.

I read back through the whole thing every couple days to see if i find anything new. I've yet to disappoint myself.

Feel free to point out any you find though.

As for where i'm going with this... my long term plan is a recant of Shinji's life as a Kitsune up until today.

Fixed some typos and added a bunch more content.