Hay um, this is a comic script that I make and I think I should show it to you all, i'm crap at the very start of these things but it does get good half way through the story, no more delays here the script of it.


Okay there the story, it is about a girl (name Kate red-tail) who live in America who got accepted at rams high school which it in England or somewhere in America (don't know which one or where it is but I let you what countries you want) also it have a dorm for student who are out of the county and her uncle (name George red-tail) who is the printable there along with son and d are also there, at Kate first day at her new high school, as Kate get off the bus (along with other students) and look at the school which she is going to be part of, as Kate walk down the pan which she start to narrates to herself,

Sudden a football (or a soccer) cam out and she trip over it, as she was about to fall someone catch her, as she look up to see who he, he said his name was Peter and he never saw her before, at the same time a group of kid shout at her to kick the ball back to them.

As they start to have a conversation about themselves suddenly the bell rang and Peter tells her he needs to get to class and peter probably to her that we meet again soon, as Peter walk away form Kate to his class and the group of kids who are still shouting at and Kate finally kick the ball back to them, but the ball curved and about to hit a older korean kid (name jeongwang) the ball about to hit him, but he instantly catch it and side "you there, girl, what your name" so Kate tell him her name, after they has a chat and call her sonyeo at all time (it mean girl in korean) and said something to her " by the way, this school is for the unnatural" later she get call to the printable office to have a chat with her uncle to introduced his daughter (name Lìxúe) and his son (name Hēibái and Lìxúe have a asians mum who is out of the county at the moment) after Kate gone out of the printable office with the Lìxúe and have a tour around the school back at the principals office hèibái talks to his dad about the secret that in is the school and Kate is a immune to something and George said "I tell her by a couple weeks son, besides there's no way she can figure it out in one day hèibái" as Lìxúe almost finished showing the tour to Kate then out of the corner, jeongwang who come around it and was he looking for Lìxúe and cousin.

So Lìxúe explain to jeongwang that kate is his cousin who came form the US and here to stay, later at night time she was in her dorm with a weird room mate who really like cute thing and talk a lot, as she look out the window she saw the jeongwang out side where no one supposed to be out the time, so she start to follow him to into dark looking forest where she get lost in it, while she struggles to find a way back to the dome as she walk around, fox came out and it look friendly so kate get out her phone and tries to take a picture but her camera phone is a bit slow to take a picture of it.

Suddenly something came behind her, she start to slowly turn around to see what to be behind her, it was a werewolf and the camera phone finally took a picture of it but she took the picture of the werewolf, the werewolf reach out his hand and about to grab her but she start to run away form it, as Kate run through the forest and she start think "is that a wolf or a bear? No it can't be one here" as Kate looks behind her to check if is still chasing her down and it still is, the wolf is chasing her down as Kate keep on running but she trips over a route twisted her ankle, as she look turn around the wolf jumped at her about to get her,

Sudden, someone come out of nowhere kick the wolf into the wolf face, as the wolf fell on the ground and the mysterious person show his face to her and it was jeongwang who save her life and said "what are you doing" Kate replied "Err running for my life also what the hell is that thing" jeongwang said "I'm not talking to you I'm talking to this idiot wolf" she to start to get confused because animal don't talk but the wolf spoke and said "I was only chasing her down because she took a picture of me and I tries to get the phone off of her" she was shock that the wolf spoke and she took a closer look at him, he doesn't Look so big he was quite small also someone came out of those bushes and it was Hèibái and Lìxúe, all happy and Hèibái said "hay jeongwang, way did you run off like... Oh hi Kate, I see you matesd Ashton" Hèibái came out with a fox ears, multiple tail and his hand is on fire, Kate was shocked again to learn that there are most stranger thing are going on here, as Kate about to get confused but a female voice came behind and said "so this is Kate" so Kate turnarounds to know who was that, it was a anthro silver fox and side "nice to meet you, I am viola and I'm a..." suddenly she started to mumbling about werewolf, hand on fire, talking animals and things don't exist, immediately jeongwang give Kate a slut to her snap out of the trance and stop her mumbling, as Jeongwang ask Viola to take Ashton back to miss black-eye and explain to her what happened here so Viola takes Ashton away form them.

So Jeongwang, hèibái and Lìxúe explain to Kate what is going on here, so they explain that half of the school is fall of folklore, hybrids and students who have a power within in themselves and have to keep it a secret form other people form the world also a secret organisation that deals with people who come to close to the true or deal with paranormal activity want nothing but power, but Kate have a question about the werewolf bite her and get turned into a wolf? Hèibái explained to her that the red-tail are immune to them and the only family in history that are immune, accept some distant relatives which they kind of lost them in time and are trying to find them again, and she have a another question about hèibái and Lìxúe and side "if you two are immune cousin, way are you two are werewolf to?" Hèibái explain to her that they are not wolf, but they are a nine-tail-fox form Asia and they dad is marrying to their mum who is a nine-tail-fox, as Kate understands the gravity of it but she has one more question about "way are you doing out here?"so Hèibái replied "oh, yeah, we are doing some training out here and showing to the new students around the school and there nothing to be afraid of this school or form normal humans" Kate kind of understanding most of it and ask there a threat out there and Jeongwang said "there hasn't been a incident in years and there never will be one here, you sonyeo" then Kate said " so there is nothing to be worried about threat out there, huh I expect to be a guy who wants nothing but power, oh well look like this is going to be a normal school here, except for you kind cousin" hèibái said "none taken also I wes about to tell all about you know " Kate replies "really, but how are you going to tell me all of this cou?" As Hèibái explains to Kate how to explain of a explain, but something is looking at them and it raven who looking at them and to bring to a dark room where a crystal sphere shows the image of them and the voice said " I finally found you " and that is the end of that chapter


So what you think of it you guys? There lot of gaps in it and I'm out of ideas here also ( I'm sure about this ) give me a head or tell me what to put into and if you like to put your character on to it, be my guess.