I wanted to try to fix what I thought was wrong with this one. I added 5 more colors but 2 of those were so similar to the old colors so as not to have mattered, really. I deepened the shadows with more blue, added some nice purple as a transition from blue to brown, and put some peach in the belly area to make that look better. All that yellow by itself just wasn't working. The rest is just going back over the same areas with the same colors to ace the areas where the white was peeking through. All in all I'd say it looks a lot bettah now :d