*dances*

Don't know why I am being a critic, but I would just shorten up the intro by 10 seconds to get the beat in faster. Other than that the intro is excellent and like Seti very dancable.

*bangs head*

GOD I LOVE THIS!! thank you so much dear ^.^, it reminds me so much of Anubis off of Zone OF the Enders so I am so proud of this ^.^. You really have a nack for this even if its your first attempt, so keep it up!

*blushes* thank you father

For time period its actually really well down but the middle part 3:19-3:33 seems not to fill well with the bass kick at those intervals maybe you need an older instrument like a Congo drum or something with a similar sound but that sounds really off center. Other then that its smooth in construction and its something I could see people loop especially the last half where the song pics up with the ambient noise <3...