I like this story!

Thank you. Always glad to hear that someone does.

During the down-time, I decided to check out your DA since I was eager to read more from you.
Suddenly..... *GASP* Your full story is there!
But I noticed you're revising the story or something. Should I stick to the FA version?

Hmm. I'd say it's up to you. And thank you by the way for that.

The 'Alpha' version on DA is OK, but it is starting to show some age with the story progression and some of the dialogue until about five chapters from the end, hence why I'm self-editing and revising it still. The FA one is the most current version I have, and the one I'll likely be publishing when the time comes, so I'd say stick to this version unless you really are itching to read the whole thing. In that case, DA's version is a pretty good read, so long as you've got an account there.

I think I'll just read the revised version: it makes sure that I have a cool story to read in the evening before going to bed. =p