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Hello, so far I'm liking the story and I'm really excited to see what is to come on the next page. I also did find my self chuckling at the part where he had to say the oath of the green latern XD.
Btw there was a mistake here in page 3 on paragraph 4 or 5 I think "Alex swallowed his tongue for a second. Was he pushing her? “No.” he though." I think you meant to put the word "thought" but it didn't really bother me I'm just giving you a heads up ^^. Other then that tiny minority I say this is a pretty good story.
Btw there was a mistake here in page 3 on paragraph 4 or 5 I think "Alex swallowed his tongue for a second. Was he pushing her? “No.” he though." I think you meant to put the word "thought" but it didn't really bother me I'm just giving you a heads up ^^. Other then that tiny minority I say this is a pretty good story.
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