Yep. More Practicing, this time I was trying to get ages right. I think I did a good enough job.

10-Max just left his dad's with Tech after 7 years of harsh training. His eyes already look rather old and cold despite being a kid. He is compleatly unwilling to accept help, luckally he's nieve so a smart man outwitted him and indirectly raised him and Tech.

23-Main age in the first story. He's a bit of a big shot around town but he's apathetic. He has a girlfriend he compleatly ignores only because the only reason she's his girlfriend is because she latches onto his back any chance she gets and Max never opposed. He has a rather strict scedual he sticks to and he acts like Tech's parent instead of a brother.

46-Goofy, carefree, pererted, and really strong Max is no longer a memer of the Guard but is one of the most renownd trainers on the planet. He's a father of 3, his son being one of 4 students that were able to handle more than one session of his training. He is prone to Heart attacks.

90+-Thanks to Tech's blood Max ages way slower than most people. Though he has never won a fight against him Max's son Chaz took his place as trainer after Max decided it was time to step down, though he still has all his strength and will power, just not the bulk from his younger days. His life from this point is rather peaceful, and he honestly hates it, but Tech usually helps him out with the bordom.