Now you can see just how goddamn long this story ended up being.
More than usual I'd really appreciate comments on this one for opinions on whether or not things really worked out that much.
Original submission here.
Thumbnail was cropped from an image (and it was very harrowing to search for, I'll have you know).
Original concept the story is based on is owned by...whoever owns it.
More than usual I'd really appreciate comments on this one for opinions on whether or not things really worked out that much.
Original submission here.
Thumbnail was cropped from an image (and it was very harrowing to search for, I'll have you know).
Original concept the story is based on is owned by...whoever owns it.
Category Story / Fat Furs
Species Unspecified / Any
Size 120 x 120px
File Size 169.9 kB
Just gonna dump my review of all your stories here, since I read most of 'em and failed to write a review.
So, basically, if I had to summarize how I view your stories into one word, it would be the following: Wow. Being a fan of weight gain and fat furs/scalies/whatever, I've noticed many stories are essentially "here's the character, now they're fat, everyone loves them now!" But what your stories have done is added depth to the characters and rounded them out. (Pun unintended.) Coming onto FA, I should've expected it, but I rifle through a lot of mediocre stories on this site that don't quite measure up. Your stories, however, give me hope for the furry community (again).
That being said, I do have a question concerning THIS particular story. I noticed "Don't Eat the Berries" was a sequel of sorts to one of the stories where the human met the fat pokemon, then becoming a girthy pokemon of his own in the sequel. So, I gotta ask, are you planning anything of the same structure with "Feeling Blue?" Perhaps, a non-Pokemon TF/WG?
So, basically, if I had to summarize how I view your stories into one word, it would be the following: Wow. Being a fan of weight gain and fat furs/scalies/whatever, I've noticed many stories are essentially "here's the character, now they're fat, everyone loves them now!" But what your stories have done is added depth to the characters and rounded them out. (Pun unintended.) Coming onto FA, I should've expected it, but I rifle through a lot of mediocre stories on this site that don't quite measure up. Your stories, however, give me hope for the furry community (again).
That being said, I do have a question concerning THIS particular story. I noticed "Don't Eat the Berries" was a sequel of sorts to one of the stories where the human met the fat pokemon, then becoming a girthy pokemon of his own in the sequel. So, I gotta ask, are you planning anything of the same structure with "Feeling Blue?" Perhaps, a non-Pokemon TF/WG?
Oh, wow, thanks a lot, glad to hear you enjoy my stories that much. ;n; I generally try my best to flesh out the characters as much as possible, so the reader can have an idea of what they're like. I figure it makes it easier to relate to them and their situation when you understand their personality.
The thing about Caught in the Headlights and Don't Eat the Berries is that, after writing the first one, I hadn't originally intended for it to have a sequel, it just ended up that later on when I decided I wanted to write something it seemed that the easiest way to do it was as a sequel to that; the similarity to this is just coincidental, I don't always plan out stories this way. As for whether or not this will have such a sequel happening though...well, just wait and see. :P
The thing about Caught in the Headlights and Don't Eat the Berries is that, after writing the first one, I hadn't originally intended for it to have a sequel, it just ended up that later on when I decided I wanted to write something it seemed that the easiest way to do it was as a sequel to that; the similarity to this is just coincidental, I don't always plan out stories this way. As for whether or not this will have such a sequel happening though...well, just wait and see. :P
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