Excellent read, Shane. You have a good voice for characterization. You might want to slow down just a tad - some of the narration was a bit hard to follow, especially when going into a new area with new words and descriptions. Otherwise, very engrossing.

I'm sure Ray approves. Gawd, what would happen if Tallahassee got Alfie... there'd be a power struggle between the Dawg Pack and the Plague Rats... ;)

Ahhh yes. I was worried about that, thanks for confirming my suspicions! Next go-round I'll definitely make sure to pace myself better.

I really can't wait to see where he ends up, if any of the teams are willing to take him on at all. If he DOES get drafted, Ms Beaubonique (and yes, she's his agent officially http://www.furaffinity.net/view/10455492/) is going to have her hands full with him, I'll say that much!

i got such a kick out of alfie's voice XD did it start hurting your throat after a while? i hope you narrate more stories in the future, you're quite good at it!

LOL I'm glad you liked that. I had to do some recording after I found myself driving EVERYWHERE having Alfie conversations to myself. XD

And yeah, that voice torched my throat after a while. Went through a load of tea and water. We'll be hearing more of him in the future? Mayyyybe a phone call with Murina? Eh? EH?

Hehe, just the way I thought Alfie would sound like. Brilliant voicing, dude! :)

Either way, I can imagine Alfie going a lot of places, but it depends on who is opening up space for him.

Thanks, man! I've been working on tweaks to the accent. It's a learning process, but hey that's half the fun of doing this shit, right?

Definitely curious where he'll end up. XD

This was a blast to listen to. I'm an audiobook junkie, so when Isaw that there was a story on Alfie in audio, I just had to listen to it. I'm glad I did, because want to read all the other FATBC stories now. Also, you're voice is fun to listen to and better than some of the people I've heard from audiobooks. If you record any other stories, (or would like to recruit a fresh new talent to play a character X3) I would love to listen to more 'w'

Plan is actually to record ALL of them at some point. I have the hardware, just not the time. Also gonna re-record this to fix some problems I had with it. XD

Thanks for the good words!

Oh really? Yay, I lookf forward to hearing the rest of them, especially getting to hear Muri.

Also, this makes me want to work a ton on my own reporter character.

Really enjoyed listening to this even after having read the story

Your voice acting for Alfie brought him to life in a way I never managed to do n.n/

Looking forward to future recordings :3

I really think this story would be great to audio record. I know It might take a hell of a lot of time and effort, but I think in the end It'll pay off. All you would really need are some voice actors willing to play the parts.

Oooh, a full cast version? Damn, that ain't a terrible idea actually.....

By the beard It would be amazing!! I would listen it no doubt and I KNOW others would be willing to as well. Now all you have to do is find willing participants. You can use the story itself as the script. You could be the narrator. I'm really glad your actually considering this. When I listened to the first audio cast it was just simply amazing. I believe in you guys. If you do consider this then you should make a BIG announcement on it and see If anyone is willing to do the voice acting or any other work needed to pull it off. I think the hardest part is the length of the video. Now I've been thinking, If you need to you can separate the chapters into parts to ease the upload process. Another hard part would be finding voice actors willing to go through with it. I'm sure you can figure something out.


Sorry if this message is too long. I just got REALLY excited to see that you didn't completely ignore me. Cause' I know you have more important things to do than to read my silly comments. Anyway Thanks a ton!!!