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The story continues as we meet the primary antagonist of this tale. Lt. Edelman is basically everything I despise wrapped up into one individual. He's arrogant, mean spirited, hateful, selfish and ignorant, fully aware of what effect his actions and words have on people, he just doesn't care. Above all, Edelman is specist (racist) to the extent that he cannot see anything beyond outward appearances.

Please note that Edelman is written to be as offensive as possible, but in no way shape or form does the author share any of his attitudes or beliefs. Most of the insults he throws in Brock's face are common turn-of-the century anti-Irish slurs, but one in particular I borrowed from Brian Jacques. "Stripe Dog" is as offensive to Badgers as the "N" word, and I would appreciate it not being bandied around in discussions or comments.

***WARNING 1*** this story WILL contain baby-furs and age regression, but it will be very tastefully done. Diapers will be involved later, but will not be dwelt upon, as they are ultimately incidental to the story as a whole.

***WARNING 2*** this story is not a particularly happy one, and will be taking Brock to some very dark places. It will deal with issues of specism (i.e. racism), depression, suicide, and violence. Little Furs will find themselves in hazardous situations, and some of the events which take place may be shocking to some readers.

Please enjoy the rest of the journey.