The series continues to get more and more incredible and complex! Keep up the great work! The detail is incredible!

Thank you! Wuff is a sucker for details (especially when it comes to food *giggles*).

For the complexity, guess you have to 'blame' the characters themselves. Vargr started this as a simple takeoff on some old fairy tails and fables, but Wolf and Molly had 'other ideas'. They grabbed the reins and steared the story into new dimensions. To tell the truth, this wuff really likes the added depth and the romantic element that blossomed as a result.

Hopefully the conclusion is as satisfying as the chapters before, and wraps it all up properly.

Well, I like how you keep opening up the possibility of the wolf still eating Molly, kinda adds a bit of suspense and keeps us guessing!

Thank you! Wuff is a sucker for details (especially when it comes to food *giggles*).

For the complexity, guess you have to 'blame' the characters themselves. Vargr started this as a simple takeoff on some old fairy tails and fables, but Wolf and Molly had 'other ideas'. They grabbed the reins and steared the story into new dimensions. To tell the truth, this wuff really likes the added depth and the romantic element that blossomed as a result.

Hopefully the conclusion is as satisfying as the chapters before, and wraps it all up properly.

Thank you for sharing this!

OT

You're quite welcome!

I truly enjoy the way the story is going. I have read most of your story so far and will read the rest later tonight when I am less busy.

on a side note, I beleive I found a few more of those pesky spelling errors. in #10 3rd page, 6th Paragraph, it reads "sense of small" I beleive it was intended to be "sense of smell"
in this one on the 1st page, 2nd Paragraph, it says "it was as nearly as large or larger that when" once again the spellchecker fails to notice it should be "than when" I think that is all the spelling mistakes from the ones I've read so far.

I hope you spot any spelling errors on any of my own stories when they are finished.

I can't wait to finish reading the rest of your story!

Thanks for the careful proof-reading! That is really useful!

You're right about those catches; wuffy will fix those when he gets back to his 'source computer' tonight.

Vargr has a problem with reading what he [U}wanted[/u] to be there, rather than what he actually typed. It doesn't help that his stubby paws seem to be hitting everything but the right keys some days. *grins* Needs one of those 'error correcting' keyboards when they finally show up on the market.

Thanks again! And wuff hopes you enjoy those final chapters when you get to them!

Whee, corrections!

At the beginning of page 3, when Molly was "taking up the massing his tummy he'd left off", the phrase sounded awkward and I'm not even sure if it's correct grammar. I would suggest you change it to "taking up the massaging of his tummy where he'd left off" so that the context is clearer. Wordiness is good in some places. :)

The fifth paragraph (excluding isolated dialog) on page 3 ends with "There are at last as many, however, as in the soft." I'm pretty sure you meant to say "There are at least" rather than "There are at last".


I'm a little curious as to why the wolf would frequent the market and know about Miller's stall if he's considered to be somewhat of a monster among the humans... Could you explain this?

Still a fantastic story. I'm going to be saving them when they're all polished and I might even print them as a book-style copy for myself. Really nice work, and a fun story that twists fairy tails to fit the tastes of the modern furry. :P

I have to do chores now, prolly have to wait until tomorrow to finally finish this wonderful story. But from what I've seen at the end of this chapter, my hopes are rekindled at this turning out to be a relationship that I can honestly live with. (I'm really kinda against beastiality, even in stories...^_^; ) Oh, and how pretty you described Molly the wolf! I wonder if you'll somehow find a way to...!

And, by the by, I'm currently taking AP Psychology. I recognized the hindbrain reference in this or another chapter after a bit of thought and, from the unit we just cleared, knew that he couldn't smell himself due to sensory adaptation (I THINK that's the right term). I LOVE this story! Not only is it good for "us", but it's got depth, and it's ALSO got a good little review! Believe it or not, people like seeing things in books and such that test their knowledge. (Hey, that's why Brain Age keeps going!) I can't wait to read the rest!!

Thanks for those kind and insightful words!

Ol' Vargr likes to add little touches like those you mentioned, hindbrain and such, to keep a story a bit more 'grounded' and realistic. And, as you mentioned, it's also fun to add a teeny bit of education, or perhaps incite a quick 'Google search' on a reader's part to look up a reference here or a name there. Wuff thinks it helps add to the immersion of the story, and that's something Vargr especially enjoys in the tales wuffy reads; fully immersive, gripping text where you practically feel the soft touch of fur on your own fingers, smell the aromas, hear the sizzle and spit of the bacon.... Or actually feel the twinge of fear and the little clench in the gut, or the elation, or the tears, as the characters experience them.

Thank you very much for your comments. It's exactly this sort of feedback that "renews the Muse" and sets this wuff's creative juices to bubbling once again!