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A Big Bad Wolf Gets His Just Desserts (Part 9)
[[ This is part 9 of the series. It doesn't stand alone. Please read the prior parts first. ]]
"In vino veritas." and "In dreams we find our reality." What happens when you feed a formerly-starving wolf who hasn't been able to afford a drink in months yet another bottle of wine on top of all that rum in the black bottomed pie? Presentation of the fourth course. But a few more important matters come up before it can be tasted.
(Story contains conversations between furry and human, long loving descriptions of various foods, growing affections, and gluttony - lots and lots of gluttony!)
"In vino veritas." and "In dreams we find our reality." What happens when you feed a formerly-starving wolf who hasn't been able to afford a drink in months yet another bottle of wine on top of all that rum in the black bottomed pie? Presentation of the fourth course. But a few more important matters come up before it can be tasted.
(Story contains conversations between furry and human, long loving descriptions of various foods, growing affections, and gluttony - lots and lots of gluttony!)
Category Story / Inflation
Species Wolf
Size 78 x 120px
File Size 137.8 kB
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*nods* Their relationship is growing almost as fast as Wolf's tummy! *chuckles* Glad you're enjoying the character interplay as much as the feeding.
Amazing how Vargr's original idea has evolved as the writing's gone on. Even this Wuffy is surprised at how much it has changed. This was supposed to be (many moons ago) just a simple fairy tale rendition with not much more depth than an Aesop's Fable like Frog and the Ox. Quite frankly, the original wasn't a whole lot more than an excuse to write a story to make the force feeding fetish and inflation fetish friends among wuff's watchers (and wuffy himself) feel all yiffy. *chuckles*
Vargr never suspected it would grow into a mini-epic like this, with all the warm and tender 'soap opera' moments. Wuff must say though, he likes this version much better than the original concept.
Amazing how Vargr's original idea has evolved as the writing's gone on. Even this Wuffy is surprised at how much it has changed. This was supposed to be (many moons ago) just a simple fairy tale rendition with not much more depth than an Aesop's Fable like Frog and the Ox. Quite frankly, the original wasn't a whole lot more than an excuse to write a story to make the force feeding fetish and inflation fetish friends among wuff's watchers (and wuffy himself) feel all yiffy. *chuckles*
Vargr never suspected it would grow into a mini-epic like this, with all the warm and tender 'soap opera' moments. Wuff must say though, he likes this version much better than the original concept.
>> You've been learning from Shrek, haven't you?
*snickers* One finds one's role models where one can!
>> Sure seems like he's "shedding" his layers pretty quickly! XD3 lol
Well, wuff only has about 14 chapters to get to the 'core' of things. *smiles* Gotta move along quickly.
*snickers* One finds one's role models where one can!
>> Sure seems like he's "shedding" his layers pretty quickly! XD3 lol
Well, wuff only has about 14 chapters to get to the 'core' of things. *smiles* Gotta move along quickly.
What's a feeding-fetish and fattening story, without the food to back it up? Would seem to wuff that the food ought to be as much a 'character' in those cases, as any of the more mobile particpants.
>> they're excellent - and almost enough to make me hungry.
*Laughs* Seem's Vargr has read words to that effect from others as well. At this rate, wuff is going to have a lot of fat-furs among his +watch list, whether they started that way or not!
>> they're excellent - and almost enough to make me hungry.
*Laughs* Seem's Vargr has read words to that effect from others as well. At this rate, wuff is going to have a lot of fat-furs among his +watch list, whether they started that way or not!
Thank you much for the kind words! Glad you're enjoying this series.
As wuff mentioned to OnyxTao, it just seems right that the food be given its fair time in the spotlight as well, especially in a fattening and feeding fetish story.
Vargr also tried to put himself in the place of Wolf there; with a lupine sense of smell and after arriving near-starved at the beginning of the story, the food itself would have to make a huge impression on our protagonist. This wuffy tried to convey some of feeling of Wolf's focus and impressions though the explicit descriptions. Looks like it's working! *grins*
Wuffy's also very glad that the blossoming romance isn't getting lost among all the rest. Yay! *grins again*
As wuff mentioned to OnyxTao, it just seems right that the food be given its fair time in the spotlight as well, especially in a fattening and feeding fetish story.
Vargr also tried to put himself in the place of Wolf there; with a lupine sense of smell and after arriving near-starved at the beginning of the story, the food itself would have to make a huge impression on our protagonist. This wuffy tried to convey some of feeling of Wolf's focus and impressions though the explicit descriptions. Looks like it's working! *grins*
Wuffy's also very glad that the blossoming romance isn't getting lost among all the rest. Yay! *grins again*
I have to say, I'm really enjoying this series, Wuffy, and I'm glad it's evolved the way it has. I especially love the little food-induced dream, and the way poor Wolf reacts. Molly certainly is very nice about it! But I suppose similar thoughts have been occupying her mind *laughs* Your writing really deserves more favs than ya get; your skill is intimidating to say the least!
Vargr had a bit of a tough internal decision when it came time to edit that Dream Session in this chapter. During the writing, the sequence just flowed out of wuff's pawtips thru the keyboard; once again just 'taking dictation' from what the characters were doing in wuff's mind.
But, when it came time to go back and edit, Vargr was rather torn about leaving it in, editing it to reduce reference to the 'effect', or just leaving it as it was. It seemed a rather natural reaction for Wolf, given his wild, wolfish rather uncivilized character combined with the effects of Molly's attention and the alcohol. But Vargr was also worried about making this a bit too 'racy'. Definitely wanted to keep the story at PG or below, and this chapter came much closer to crossing that boundary.
In the long run, wuff finally decided to leave it "as is" and just edit the grammar and spelling errors from the scene. It adds a bit of titillation for those who like such things, and definitely highlights the change in Wolf's emotions. It also gave a nice opportunity to build Molly's character a bit more.
Vargr sees Molly with a sort of 'down home practicality' and a folksy innocence. As she mentions in her reply to Wolf, she's had the practical experience of every famer or rancher in "those things". But wuffy didn't want that to detract from her wholesome country-girl feeling. It also gave the opportunity to hint that she wasn't quite the total innocent, girlish figure some of the earlier scenes might have implied. The "women enough to..." remark hopefully an underlying maturity that offsets any thought that Wolf might be some sort of 'cradle robber' and taking complete advantage of Molly in this situation. *smiles* I think future chapters will bring that to light even more, as we get more insights into Molly's thoughts.
Actually, considering Wolf's current situation, the bet Molly manipulated him into, and the obvious evidence from his constantly expanding tummy, folks might be a bit unsure of exactly which one is the dominant force in this story. *chuckles* Wolf certainly presents the intimidating, physical choice, but does his brawn outweigh Molly's brain?
Thanks again for the kind complements on this wuff's writing! Very glad you find it so entertaining!
But, when it came time to go back and edit, Vargr was rather torn about leaving it in, editing it to reduce reference to the 'effect', or just leaving it as it was. It seemed a rather natural reaction for Wolf, given his wild, wolfish rather uncivilized character combined with the effects of Molly's attention and the alcohol. But Vargr was also worried about making this a bit too 'racy'. Definitely wanted to keep the story at PG or below, and this chapter came much closer to crossing that boundary.
In the long run, wuff finally decided to leave it "as is" and just edit the grammar and spelling errors from the scene. It adds a bit of titillation for those who like such things, and definitely highlights the change in Wolf's emotions. It also gave a nice opportunity to build Molly's character a bit more.
Vargr sees Molly with a sort of 'down home practicality' and a folksy innocence. As she mentions in her reply to Wolf, she's had the practical experience of every famer or rancher in "those things". But wuffy didn't want that to detract from her wholesome country-girl feeling. It also gave the opportunity to hint that she wasn't quite the total innocent, girlish figure some of the earlier scenes might have implied. The "women enough to..." remark hopefully an underlying maturity that offsets any thought that Wolf might be some sort of 'cradle robber' and taking complete advantage of Molly in this situation. *smiles* I think future chapters will bring that to light even more, as we get more insights into Molly's thoughts.
Actually, considering Wolf's current situation, the bet Molly manipulated him into, and the obvious evidence from his constantly expanding tummy, folks might be a bit unsure of exactly which one is the dominant force in this story. *chuckles* Wolf certainly presents the intimidating, physical choice, but does his brawn outweigh Molly's brain?
Thanks again for the kind complements on this wuff's writing! Very glad you find it so entertaining!
Hehe, that's interesting, Wuff. Near the beginning, Wolf certainly had somewhat of an overwhelming power, but now that we've passed through more chapters, Molly's grabbed a little power here and there, and the two characters seem relatively even. I'd say you've pulled off the effect you wanted. In fact, if I had to pick one, I'd say Molly has more control of the current situation! I'd also say that how you've described Molly is exactly how I picture her: a courteous, kind girl who knows more than she lets on. Stick with your instincts as you keep writing; they seem to be serving you well!
*grins* Points to you, Onyx! You actually made Vargr have to look up "orthography". Happens rarely, but wuff loves the spiffy new words. *grins more* And that's definitely a good one!
Wuff does agree with you; there are more than enough 'gray areas' and disagreements in usage, even among experts. But wuff has found that, if you're internally consistant within the publication, you're rarely chided over it - and (more importantly), your readers DO have an easier time of things. And, after all, the media and presentation should never interfere with a reader's ability to absorb and enjoy the story.
Wuff does agree with you; there are more than enough 'gray areas' and disagreements in usage, even among experts. But wuff has found that, if you're internally consistant within the publication, you're rarely chided over it - and (more importantly), your readers DO have an easier time of things. And, after all, the media and presentation should never interfere with a reader's ability to absorb and enjoy the story.
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