So, my pup pack in RL has been telling me to submit the story I wrote, and I've been dragging my feet about it, but now it's ready to upload.

I'm doing it little by little, since A) I want to see how it's received, and B) I like there being a little bit of antici...



...pation for stories.

So let me know what you think, and any constructive criticism is welcomed heartily.