Fun things!
11 years ago
General
Well, not entirely really. But I have an experiment I want to try. If any of you couples out there have a poem, please post in the comments below for all to read and then thusly comment on. It can be any length, just please have the proper separations in the lines, of course! I'd make a poem up right now but I've been out driving all day. Had to take my mate to the hospital due to a stomach bug but he is fine now!
I ran in blessed drizzle,
I walked across the silver desserts.
I dived under golden sun gleams, and
I passed thousand of seas;
To get to the Seven Gates.
Sometimes I was lost in a crowd
But I felt your love's power
Pulling me towards you all the time.
Will we be able to survive together?
For this world is a flaring place
But I'll gladly take the chance, for
You are the only one I love till eternity.
I stopped, and saw the empty skies above,
A graveyard with a newly buried couple,
A dark cloud wandering lonely.
But the silver line in it,
Manifested the diamond necklace I gave you.
Then came a fresh breeze
I felt your sweet voice and divine aroma in it.
So I saw you in a sea of roses,
In a blossoming bud,
In a luminous sunbeam,
In a fragrant wind,
And then everywhere.
Suddenly there were colors and songs in the atmosphere.
An angel was sprinkling magical dust
A cupid was shooting arrows of flowers.
My heart leaped out
For I saw my Cinderella............
She's a divine Goddess, I was feared to touch.
She had lit a lamp for me
But I was the one who burnt all the time.
She does not know.....
Her voice filled my vacant ears,
Her magical eyes stung in my heart,
Her glittering smile made halos in me.
She was my secret promise..............
The flames that burned in my heart,
Now have become caressing petals.
I removed my heart and gave to her,
She wore it in her wedding finger.
If can also be either a rhyming poem or non rhyming that tells a story. I'm curious to see the creations you all will have. May take a while to respond to them due to my busy life, but I'll come around~
I ran in blessed drizzle,
I walked across the silver desserts.
I dived under golden sun gleams, and
I passed thousand of seas;
To get to the Seven Gates.
Sometimes I was lost in a crowd
But I felt your love's power
Pulling me towards you all the time.
Will we be able to survive together?
For this world is a flaring place
But I'll gladly take the chance, for
You are the only one I love till eternity.
I stopped, and saw the empty skies above,
A graveyard with a newly buried couple,
A dark cloud wandering lonely.
But the silver line in it,
Manifested the diamond necklace I gave you.
Then came a fresh breeze
I felt your sweet voice and divine aroma in it.
So I saw you in a sea of roses,
In a blossoming bud,
In a luminous sunbeam,
In a fragrant wind,
And then everywhere.
Suddenly there were colors and songs in the atmosphere.
An angel was sprinkling magical dust
A cupid was shooting arrows of flowers.
My heart leaped out
For I saw my Cinderella............
She's a divine Goddess, I was feared to touch.
She had lit a lamp for me
But I was the one who burnt all the time.
She does not know.....
Her voice filled my vacant ears,
Her magical eyes stung in my heart,
Her glittering smile made halos in me.
She was my secret promise..............
The flames that burned in my heart,
Now have become caressing petals.
I removed my heart and gave to her,
She wore it in her wedding finger.
If can also be either a rhyming poem or non rhyming that tells a story. I'm curious to see the creations you all will have. May take a while to respond to them due to my busy life, but I'll come around~
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I think you would like it.
https://www.furaffinity.net/view/6856276/
https://drive.google.com/file/d/0Bz.....p=docslist_api