Hi! So awhile back an artist for Magic asked me for a few pointers on drawing a few types of animals. I gladly did, and he currently is an artist for MTG Bloomburrow. Taking a look at the art for the set, I wish I could have put in a piece, so, my goal is to make my art better, if not that kind of quality.

So, once a week I'll be putting in a completely hand drawn and colored piece and am looking for critiques - good, bad, and ugly. Again, my goal is to make it more realistic and more 'museum' quality so to speak. I have to start somewhere so this week it is this:

https://www.furaffinity.net/view/57357662/
https://www.deviantart.com/goodtime.....ers-1074418553

I know the coloring needs a lot of work, there is smudging, outlines, all that - but I wanted a place to start from. So please be honest and tell me what needs work and what does work. Also, if there is a medium you think I should try, a different kind of paper, etc. let me know! I'd be willing to give it a shot. I'd just really like to improve.

Every weekly piece will be a future one for my New World, New Memories CYOA too, so it won't go to waste.

Again, I appreciate honesty.

Thanks! You are all great!