Mayhaps a whirring noise at the beginning would be good, as an initiation sound would be a nice addition.

(Though, I know how sometimes moving over notes can be a pain.
If you do decide to do that though, you should take the first sound, the voice, and move it to another pattern,
then add the whirring noise, then set the pattern order in order.)

This actually sounds pretty good.

Toward the ending it is a tad redundant, having it fade out would be better.

Lower the volume of the notes progressively as you go along to fade it out..

You've got potential I think. Keep up the good work!

*dances around happily* thank you!!!!!

It's a little too chaotic i think..and you definately need to add a nice and juicy beat to it ya know~ I also see you're using audio loops, which are really no good in music making, only in some parts though..

If you're seriously into making music and learning how to make good music..then get FL Studio 7 or 8..ooor the newest Reason sequenser~ Personally i haven't used reason for a long time, but i know quite alot of stuff from FL Studio already~

It's not like me to fav loop songs..but i guess i like it enough to fav it~ Thanks for liking my songs aswell~

wow I actually never thought about that! thank you so much I'll look right into it!!!!