Heh such a teasing little picture I like the colors and details awesome job!

yup lets hope that ajna like it.

Awe I am sure they like it :) you make us all happy but me more so!

A lovely result! Before I leave my final critique I just want to thank you again for the drawing. It's very lovely. ^_^ I apologize for making you wait so long for my replies!

I suggest you look into using light sources. They really help add dimension to your drawings. It can be a little tough, especially if you're not used to thinking in terms of 3D but once you get it, it really shoots up the quality of your work. Here are two of my favorites. Specifically, focus on shading around a light source, and using multiple colors for the shading, for extra depth. Hopefully these help!

Simple beginners: http://grypwolf.deviantart.com/art/Shading-tutorial-174197817?q=favby%3Aajnaart%2F46301111&qo=51
The best I've come across: http://tamberella.deviantart.com/art/Giant-Shading-Tutorial-251104611?q=favby%3Aajnaart%2F46301111&qo=50

Np Im rather good at waiting X)


and I'll be sure to take a good look at these tutorials.