you have the muzzle at a three-quarter view, but the eyes are from the front. it's hard to break away from habits, i know, but you should try drawing basic shapes to get your underlying structure before you add details. it'd help you keep from drawing the same thing over and over and it'd help you find a style too. =3

remember I draw for fun but i appreciate the advice but not all artists have time to draw all the time, i like to go at my own pace, and lots of people do like the front view commissions, yes I know its repetitive, but I know some artists do that. I dont take art seriously I have fun with it and what ever comes out, comes out. Ill get better at my own pace. Once again appreciate the constructive criticism and knowing as ur a better artist than me, I prefer to keep my art with some sort of "signature personality" something recognizable. Ill get better when ever I do, but once again hardly have the time, colors or sketchpaper anymore and get to draw when I have time. But thanks again.