Poor buisel :( he shoulda used water gun or something and willed the stomach with water, may have woken them up :o

Considering it was a dream, that just may have meant he was being digested in a filled stomach of water. :P

True x3 xD

You really had me going there. I actually started to tear up a bit. Very nice job

Making dreams into reality! XD
Well done hon!

Gotta say...I really liked this. ouo

nice hehe hope he stays in the dragon

well, as great as it was, as usual, well, actually a little disappointed.

Regretfully, I have to second that. Depending on the reality of the scenario or it indeed just being a well placed dream at an untold change in events. I still could have seen this fairing far better for the story.

Granted, perm vore was in the mass of demand for the story, still. I was hoping it used better than a re attempt at offing the wrong team member for the situation. So much potential lost, especially given how live buizel was to the rest of the group, and had so much that would have been hoped for in future chapters.

Really, a tragic disappointment. Then again it's not my story to write, but I am personally jarred in reading further. None the less, a well read scene in itself, and a cruel twist of a nightmare come reality, but this may be the chapter that ruins my taste for this story. No offense Roop.

I've been wanting to see someone get permavored for the whole thing, heh. however, the sudden "It was only a dream" was what disappointed me.

Think I made a mistake, I thought it was genuinely permavore. ^^;

I've been waiting to see it as well, I was just arguing the situation thinking it was literally the case. Since we still haven't seen the outcome of the end of this chapter to see. All the same. It's a bit disappointing that no one's genuinely taken their final bath in this sense, I understand that. I was just speaking against it being buizel. XP

Those who want to see permavore of any main character in the story should probably not hold their breath. For those who would want to see it, there are many more who wouldn't. There are other stories for that. This was meant as a supplemental thing to appease those who like digestion but not kill off an important character than many of the readers are interested in.

That was what I was saying. I'm neutral on permavore personally, not a main preference, but I'm glad it wasn't Buizel.

Alright, I follow ya.

End of the day, still not enough anal vore in this story. Hahaha.

Hah, the reason for that is probably because Roop's trying to keep it at least semi-realistic. But with the more pokemon Bret gets, the more options there are for any type of vore hehe

hmm part of wanted to see it happen to buizel for real and part of me is really happy it was only a dream cause of course i do love buizel

I very nearly unwatched you while reading this, then I found out it was only a dream and my heart started beating again. That was a little too close for comfort. *HUGE sigh of relief*

Ps. You are a master of suspense!