There is a reason why no one writes narrative in second person and it's that it's confusing and annoying to read. You might not think so and that's fine, but keep in mind that the audience is not you.

Okay the part where the character nods nervously and the other responds with "well, don't be"
Does that logically make sense to you? Nodding ones head nervously has never in history of real human interaction illicited that response from anyone ever, unless somehow the message "I am nervous" was verbatim conveyed telepathically through the ether - I don't get why Wolfy would say that. If that were to happen to me my reaction would be to say "Don't be what? Nervous? How did you know I was thinking that? Were you reading my brain? How did you read my mind?", etc

And what is it with fat fetishists and "scientific" experiments? Why is that always the device used to explain it? I mean if the transformation is what gets you bothered can't you at least be a little more creative? Or is the sciemce part of it? Because you have no idea how many of these I'se seen written.

I just don't get it. Is it even supposed to be literature as opposed to just plain smut for the masses?

Heheheh, I wasn't getting any ideas for other story lines, so I went with a second person narrative to pass the time.

Wolfy and Guilmon were in the same group when they made that film. Obviously, they didn't think it through at the time, and they thought that Guilmon's nervousness was already visible on his face. Wolfy, being the unclear bastard that he is, acts like he already knows everything, including your thoughts, and shows it. In fact, he enjoys doing it too! Guilmon, on the other hand, is rather unobservant, and doesn't even notice how Wolfy practically read his mind in their film. In fact, none of them even bothered to change that old film with something that makes more 'sense'.

...Meh, don't blame me, blame the Tech Group. They're the ones who do all the sciency stuff around here. I just record the progress and stuff.

I thank you for commenting my story, and reviewing it. I can definitely use this to help put my story writing skills back on track (if it ever was there). But to be perfectly honest, this looked more like smut to me now that you point out all of that. Oh well, live and learn...
I'll probably try harder next time, or make even more smut. But hey, I am trying here.

Well not that the whole thing looked like smut (trust me, see mine) but it was more like it starts out as closer to Portal and the reader's thinking "oh man I wonder what this is headed into", and then you keep reading and then there's a jarring shift into the real subject matter, know what I mean?