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A sci-fi story of James, a young vagabond who thought it would be easy money to work his way across the galaxy on an old freighter.
A shortcut through an unmapped system doesn't go to plan and James and the lion-like alien Crit find themselves fighting for their lives on an inhospitable alien planet.
And Crit's species are consummate carnivores.
Chapter 9:
You'd think they'd be happy to see another living being for the first time on this god forsaken planet.
They've found one of the pirate's bases and James gets an unwelcome look at Crit's dark side.
Note: Use of stronger language than normal for my writing.
Comments and critiques are welcome.
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A shortcut through an unmapped system doesn't go to plan and James and the lion-like alien Crit find themselves fighting for their lives on an inhospitable alien planet.
And Crit's species are consummate carnivores.
Chapter 9:
You'd think they'd be happy to see another living being for the first time on this god forsaken planet.
They've found one of the pirate's bases and James gets an unwelcome look at Crit's dark side.
Note: Use of stronger language than normal for my writing.
Comments and critiques are welcome.
PREV | FIRST | NEXT
Category Story / All
Species Lion
Size 120 x 120px
File Size 269.3 kB
Listed in Folders
Wow, I look away for a second and you up and post again. Good speed, pleases the needy masses :P
As always I love your characters. They're rounded, interesting, dynamic, changing - with only two real characters at the moment it's great to see how they clash and connect. Very well done!
I'm actually really curious... is romance going to be an important element later on? I was surprised by the romantic twist in The Hunters, definitely made the ending much more meaningful, but it would seem almost out of place in this one. Just wondering.
As a side note....
"blue skinned something" lulz
As always I love your characters. They're rounded, interesting, dynamic, changing - with only two real characters at the moment it's great to see how they clash and connect. Very well done!
I'm actually really curious... is romance going to be an important element later on? I was surprised by the romantic twist in The Hunters, definitely made the ending much more meaningful, but it would seem almost out of place in this one. Just wondering.
As a side note....
"blue skinned something" lulz
Thanks.
I'm here like clockwork every Monday and Wednesday for this story. Gotta be consistent!
While I'll admit the idea did cross my mind more than a couple of times, romance just didn't seem to fit. I hate the term, but it might be better to call it a bromance of sorts.
And it's great to know I have a long-term reader!
Oh, and just wait until the two of them have to rent a hotel room together...
I'm here like clockwork every Monday and Wednesday for this story. Gotta be consistent!
While I'll admit the idea did cross my mind more than a couple of times, romance just didn't seem to fit. I hate the term, but it might be better to call it a bromance of sorts.
And it's great to know I have a long-term reader!
Oh, and just wait until the two of them have to rent a hotel room together...
Wait, WHUT?? Don't tease me! xD
Even if I agree with you I would NOT complain if there was an alternate reality side story focusing on them in a hotel room... just saying...
But seriously, I love a clean story, always leaves me more satisfied in the end. Sometimes I just crave a good plot and can't get enough of it (AKA 99% of the time I'm at my computer)
Even if I agree with you I would NOT complain if there was an alternate reality side story focusing on them in a hotel room... just saying...
But seriously, I love a clean story, always leaves me more satisfied in the end. Sometimes I just crave a good plot and can't get enough of it (AKA 99% of the time I'm at my computer)
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