Even with out color this cool :D

So sorry about the delay on critiquing this for you! Loving this pose! It's really adorable.

Your lines give off a "traced" feeling. Obviously it's because you sketched this out, then traced the sketch with your lines, which is how almost everyone does it. However, it's painfully obvious here. It's extra work, but I think it pays off in the end. When you're drawing something that is going to be covered, draw what's underneath, anyway! In this example. draw her entire arm from elbow to the hand. Then, draw the ribbons over top, preferably on a new layer. Then you can erase her arms underneath that are covered by the ribbons, merge the layers down, and make any adjustments if necessary. That should make the lines much more believable. Hopefully that makes sense~

it does. i am not in the habit of taking advantage digital art has to offer.

You really should! Traditional art has plenty of advantages, but I'm a die hard digital fan. ^_^ It's great.

same here I just need to rember to think with it and not just go over a drawing like tracing paper.