So of corse that's title but I'm doing is posting stories like this since I can't post REAL stories. And if its adult I can just click the sumbission rating to adult. My friend Star suggested this. So anyways its justa quck story. There's thought put into it, its just not long. Its a naruto story.

Naruto was in konoha (leaf village if you didn't know) just thinking how, with kyuubi control, how to get sasuke back.

"Umm naruto..." a shy cute voice said naruto with his head down looked up suddenly. "Oh hey hinata!" Said nauto. "Yeah... uhh hi." She was blushing and was looking at naruto's feet. "Hinata... I'm sorry Neji died, if I could go back in time and stop it, you know I would... but that's never gonna happen." Naruto walked up to hinata and grabbed her hands. "Hinata was blushing deeply now. "I want to protect all my friends... that's why I want sasuke back, so I can change his mind set and make him be good... like uhh, you." Naruto smiled at hinata, Hinata looked at naruto. She smiled. "Your so confident naruto, so nice and up beat. That's why I like you." She, with all of he power, gave naruto a big hug. Naruto hugged tightly back. *crash* Naruto looked behind the konoha gate. "What!" A white, dead skin looking man with sliked back hair said. "YOU DON'T REMEMBER ME! *NIHAHA*" said the man "Hi-hidan!" Said naruto "There you go, hey give this kid a prize, he remembered!" Said hidan. "HIDAN, BUT HOW!" Yelled naruto. "Well as you can see, I'm outta that hole and I geuss some guy attached all my parts together." "*grrr!* naruto's lines on his face got blacker and thicker, "HINATA, GET THE OTHERS!" Naruto aggresivly said "NO, naruto! I know I can help you do this. Plus the villge will hear the commotion!" Said hinata. "Huh? Well... ok the-" "enough Chatter! Are we gonna fight!?" Hidan throw his sythe at naruto. It flew fast threw the air. *chink* "how!" Hidan said. Naruto grabbed the sythe by the blade and said "you know hidan, its very rude to interupped people, especially if its people that can DEFEAT YOU!" Naruto then turned into sage mode. "Let's get this guy hinata!" "YES NARUTO!" "Well, who ever said I was alone?" The other akatsuki members apeared out of the forest (except obito)."I'll take half of you out with one GO! Kage bushin no jutsu!" (Shadow clone jutsu) "and I'll take the REST OF YOU ON! BYAKUGAN!" Said hinata. "FUTON! RASEN-SHURIKEN!" The akatsuki got ready to dodge the attack when from behind they herd "Chyono Hanke! Hyokojoyosho!!!" (Protective 8 trigrams 64 palms gaurd!) As they turned around they got hit by they barrier of hits. "OK< LET'S DO THIS! YEEEEAAAAH!" The rasen-shuriken was thrown tword Hidan, konan, deidara, kakuzu, and pain! At the last secound, hinata jumped out of the way. "Katun! Hosenka no jutsu!" Itachi shot a fireball at hinata "No hinata!' "NARUTO!" *I'm not gonna see any of my friends get hurt anymore.* naruto went into kyuubi control and quickly dashed, grabbed hinata and dashed back to the gate. "Naruto..." "Itachi, you wanted to see the kyuubi for yourself huh? Well HerE *guhh* YOu GOOOO!" Naruto transformed into kurama. "Wow, magnificent." *GAAAAAH!* naruto charged his bijuu cannon. (Demon chakara cannon) Then everything went black. "*snore* whaa!" Naruto woke up and looked out side his tent, "well I'm still on the road to fight madara..."


The end (just a test.)